[@Lugia] Looks fine ^^. Although it probably won't affect your post, you should probably be aware that he's not physically holding his sword right now. It's stuck in the ground in front of him. And you would also probably know that he has [i]just about[/i] zero control over his magic if he's not holding it. 

Also, you don't know what city you lived in? XD. Probably should pick a name, at least! 


[@lavulman] aaahhahaha. BE CAREFUL WHAT YOU WISH FOR, MY FRIEND.