I'm sorry for sounding so incensed in these last two posts, I made (faulty) conclusions, and very brusquely [i]decided[/i] that this what what you were going for with Jack. I've got a big problem with drawing the wrong conclusions from other people and arbitrarily deciding that my way is the right way. If you ever feel angered or offended by anything that I say, I will not fault you for disregarding my opinion. I actively encourage it, in fact! After all, the best way for criticism to be constructive is if it's in an acceptable form!

Your "shitty writing" is not "shitty" at all, it's just the way I interpreted it! I took a conclusion from it that you didn't intend to, and that is entirely my fault.

I'm very interested in seeing Jack's character arc, especially considering the plot Vertical has set up for you guys. I'm sure his anti-authoritarian tendencies will blossom beautifully when the big shit-kickers of the Colorado wasteland decide to turn and face the party. Should make for some great RPing!