I hate to say this, but the sheet is honestly a complete mess. While I'm not a grammar nazi by any measure (in fact, English isn't even my native language), this crossed the limit of what I can deem as acceptable writing. It is full of typos, bad grammar, improper use of capitalization and even has parts that are unintelligible such as these:

[@Shoryu]
[*][b]Secondary Weapon System[/b]: 
[hider=secondary]
It has a secondary set of smaller more agile arms well protected behind the larger primaries, as well as a Couple of stored devices these arms are able to manipulate, [u]as well as several the purpose of maintenance on the primary arms that are expected to take quite a pounding[/u].
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[@Shoryu]
Once he got over his past, he seemed to settle into the behavior of a Fiercely protective older brother[u]... tooo,[/u] just about anyone who wasn't an enemy really.[/quote]

It needs to be spellchecked alongside your OOC posts, which are also a sore to read. Then there's the character itself. I won't accept a 16-year-old built like a buff adult with the excuse of genetics; that reeks of a Marty Stu, and I hate those. Russia hasn't existed for thousands of years, and no Russian actually has red hair and gold eyes. Seriously, who has that combination of colors and doesn't look like a joke? And why does he 'like' with air-quotes? Is that implying he doesn't actually 'like' things or is that a repeating error? 

Then the Framewerk. The repair drones, repair tendrils and railgun-style charging shot of the rifle have to be dropped, and the rifle's name changed to something else, since there already is a Battle Rifle in the RP. The Repair Kit and the Welder Gun are the same device with only a difference in flavor text, having both of them is unnecessary. Any repairing the Framewerk needs to do can be done with only the secondary pair of arms and a single device, anything else added on top of that is redundant.

The forced blast of the primary arms needs to have the drawback of being unable to activate the shields on them for couple of turns after using it.

And the most important thing: [b]you need to stop using emoticons[/b]. This isn't a chatroom, and adding a 'XD' to every post like a texting teenager is aggravating to read.