huh, seems distractions were causing some brain farts again...

I'll just proof read things next time, and honestly I'm really working to get the emoticon habit to break, but It 'never' shows up in more serious posts, especially never IC... That was supposed to say 'serving the purpose', though that's not really entirely 'non-sense' just an annoying slip.

I actually deliberately made him look like that 'because' it made him look like a jack-ass, the implication was it was some other idiot's idea to try and make him intimidating, and running into that on the street would still freak a dude out. The quotation of 'lucky genetics' was not meant to be serious, but an allusion to the later mention in his background of genetic tampering for the sake of being a better enforcer, he was already tough, they just did something to add a little more. It's not like he's gonna go around face-punching mechs, that'd be fucking stupid.

It's whatever though, I can just dump the genetic tinkering that all of those problems are tied to. Also, I didn't say he was 'from' Russia, I was referencing that as an archetype.

Okay, so then, nerf about 90% of the support potential by removing the only thing that can move around to the other side of something that he's repairing [he can't even 'see' the other side of something even if the normal arms could reach around that far], as well as the only thing that can actually hand out the ammo from his storage pack [you don't think those arms are flexible enough to grab his 'back' do you?], and remove the 'rail-gun' part of the railgun [rail-guns generally have to charge in order to shoot afterall, I wasn't talking one shot kill punch-through, we're talking several seconds of charge to be able to get a single standard shot to actually 'make it' to long-range distance, not to mention the compact gun with no integrated power-source can't even power it's rail-gun function without the tendrils that were setup to hook into it.]

I 'already' included a bit about the Over-charging for the force-blast causing them to be unable to charge more energy for a while, which inherently includes being unable to charge the energy portion of the shields.

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I hate to say this, but the sheet is honestly a complete mess. While I'm not a grammar nazi by any measure (in fact, English isn't even my native language), this crossed the limit of what I can deem as acceptable writing. It is full of typos, bad grammar, improper use of capitalization and even has parts that are unintelligible such as this:

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I can't help but feel that you took some parts of it more seriously than they were meant to be taken, but like I said, I'll go through and proof-read shit.

On a side note, I hate mary/marty/gary's too.

I also had no intention of him being like 'hulk dude' or any such shit, though it's funny the implication that a character having healthy muscular genetics would qualify them as being perfect [the requirement of being anything close to a 'mary sue'.] which is a remarkably over-used assumption I see on the internet, people pretending to be superior because they have some muscle on em.

I actually had a good idea in my head for the general proportions, but I honestly got fucking SICK of stumbling across porn, on Deviantart no less, while trying to find a good example, so I gave the fuck up. But I'll just scrap the text portion and use the picture that's already there then.