My 'opinions' are done, and the first post has been edited to include the details on the previous run as well as a quick primer on your base and the surrounding area, so take a look if you're interested.

Az, as for your posts, I haven't been able to spend much time with them just yet, except the first one which I liked quite a bit. I may PM you with something a bit more constructive if I come up with something, but if I don't say anything, it's safe to assume you're totally fine. I like to leave people to post in whatever format appeals to them. This is advanced, so creativity should be encouraged, and trust between players should be pretty important. I trust that you can get the point of your post across in whatever way you think is best, so I don't specify a particular posting format. As long as you can tolerate it when somebody posts in a different style, people should be tolerant of you. That's my philosophy anyway.