[@PhoebeCarlisle]

Ah, looks good. Accepted.

But I would like it if, from now on, there are at least 2 or 3 paragraphs of backstory. I won't make you change it, but something you may want to keep in mind.

Also, you should know that the owner of the Wizard Tower might need some convincing to let you in, sense it is usually reserved for well known wizards.
Actually, I'm gonna add a section on the CS asking how you found out about the tower, because I like that you bothered saying how you heard of it.