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Nice avatar :p
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@Fat Boy Kyle Do you have room for one more amongst you? I just read thru the entire IC and I found it phenomenal. I can have a CS up and posted soon, followed by an intro post if you'll have me (:
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@Fat Boy Kyle Do you have room for one more amongst you? I just read thru the entire IC and I found it phenomenal. I can have a CS up and posted soon, followed by an intro post if you'll have me (:


Supposed to be full, but I'm constantly bending my own rules xP Get good CS in and we'll see if we can fit you in.
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Supposed to be full, but I'm constantly bending my own rules xP Get good CS in and we'll see if we can fit you in.


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all hail@Fat Boy Kyle the RULE BENDER!!!!!

that aside@MacabreFox welcome to these plague ridden lands
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all hail@Fat Boy Kyle the RULE BENDER!!!!!

that aside@MacabreFox welcome to these plague ridden lands


We'll see! Fingers crossed on my part, haha!
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@Fat Boy Kyle You'll have to forgive my intrusion but how about we just skip to the next part (travel? Next morning?) and we can do the meetings as flashbacks to the current night? That way we're not stuck waiting for people (esp. if we don't know if said people are still around, right?)
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Simple, but good! Couple of very small things though:

I'd like to see a little bit more fleshing out in regards to equipment; so include what she's wearing and also give us some descriptions of her weapons (e.g. a plain, relatively new Iron sword).

It's also a bit hard to understand why she was banished? She saved her Dad from bandits and the shop burned down? Are the two connected? Does he blame her? Why would he?

You didn't mention what religion, if any, she was. It doesn't have to be an import factor for her, but it's better if we know.
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@Fat Boy Kyle You'll have to forgive my intrusion but how about we just skip to the next part (travel? Next morning?) and we can do the meetings as flashbacks to the current night? That way we're not stuck waiting for people (esp. if we don't know if said people are still around, right?)


I'll probably skip the meeting with Mathias if there's no sign of Rare. However, there's two almost complete collabs I'm waiting on (one of which is the first part of the morning post). Once these are out of the way things should hopefully speed up exponentially. Unfortunately I'm still quite busy atm (for example I spent six hours at a recruitment day yesterday - sigh).
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@Fat Boy Kyle I understand :p Spent 6 hours at a psychological evaluation for the reserves only to get denied for obscure reasons. Either way, good luck to you then.
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Simple, but good! Couple of very small things though:

I'd like to see a little bit more fleshing out in regards to equipment; so include what she's wearing and also give us some descriptions of her weapons (e.g. a plain, relatively new Iron sword).

It's also a bit hard to understand why she was banished? She saved her Dad from bandits and the shop burned down? Are the two connected? Does he blame her? Why would he?

You didn't mention what religion, if any, she was. It doesn't have to be an import factor for her, but it's better if we know.


Of course, I'll have it fixed soon!

I believe I filled in the rest as you suggested.
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Excellent, accepted! Please add your character to the CS bin :)
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I'll have a post up soon here after, most likely tomorrow.
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Wonder who'll say something about this girl arriving late :p
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Wonder who'll say something about this girl arriving late :p


She might just have been there all along, or I might just have Gwen get there late, I haven't decided yet x)
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Hiding in the dark, looking at people awkwardly? Not sure which of the two would make a worse first impression :p
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¡Estoy de vuelta de Panamá!*

Hey guys, I'm back home again! I'll try to get caught up around here ASAP. @Fat Boy Kyle, I'll try and get that collab of ours all finished up as well. @RIengo, looks like yours was finished up with Kyle's help (thanks Kyle!).

@MacabreFox - I'll let @Fat Boy Kyle say for sure, but he may want a collab to happen before your PC posts in the IC; there's a post upcoming that'll move things forward into the morning, and it'd be a shame if your first IC post had to be rewritten so as not to conflict with it. ;)

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Hiding in the dark, looking at people awkwardly? Not sure which of the two would make a worse first impression :p


Yes something of the sort!
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Hey guys, I'm back home again! I'll try to get caught up around here ASAP. @Fat Boy Kyle, I'll try and get that collab of ours all finished up as well. @RIengo, looks like yours was finished up with Kyle's help (thanks Kyle!).

@MacabreFox - I'll let @Fat Boy Kyle say for sure, but he may want a collab to happen before your PC posts in the IC; there's a post upcoming that'll move things forward into the morning, and it'd be a shame if your first IC post had to be rewritten so as not to conflict with it. ;)



Very well! I was going to write a rather simple intro post that wouldn't have Gwen interfering with the others, sign her name and take a key, and have my next post for her be more flavorful. But I like collabs! So if it calls for one, so be it (;
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