[@Pathfinder] Everything looks good, but remember one thing about a Glamor they are expensive, especially the more complex ones like Paul has. So if you ever want Paul to go all "GIANT" mode keep in mind it is basically like crashing a two million dollar car XD Not the best idea. Anywho he is approved :) [@Zobozun] Hmm he seems like a very interesting character, but I am curious about what/who is the Agency exactly. I get that Mr. Black represents the mass paranoia people have towards those in charge that exists in society, but the Agency would require a massive or elite organization that, as interesting it would be to see, I don't think would have survived having been ransacked by the Adversary's forces. [@Boomrocker] My only concern is having an actual god of war here, wouldn't that seem a tad OP? Though by your abilities he seems acceptable... Promise me you won't do any OP actions, like [s]SMITE[/s] smiting you will be accepted alright? Oh and rule six! XD [@TimeToRP] Okay a few things. First would be a little thing which is like Path said you copy and pasted the story twice in your CS, no big deal but a bit sloppy. Second would be that the last few paragraphs of your CS haven't happened yet in the story so far, Bigby and Snow have yet to be linked romantically so there would be no kids. Lastly and sadly Bigby has already been reserved by someone in the Interest Check, Dirty Dan I believe, but since they have yet to post in the actual RP they might or might not still be interested. So if they still haven't posted here in the next day you may have the character okay :)