[quote=Sixsmith]
Oh, you guys have no idea. >:3But, uh... I was getting lazy and remembered I had made Hayden partially in a PiratePad for critique from Fallout and Ex. Piratepad has been down for a whole month now, though. T_T So, it's all... all gone... for now. And I actually have to write stuff. QQ
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OH that's why it's not loading! You could still ask them for critique though!