[quote=@PhoebeCarlisle] [@ViolentViolet] [@Avanhelsing] [@ThatWeirdChick] [color=7bcdc8]Name: Imogen Carlisle[/color] Appearance: [img]http://www.hdwallpapersimages.com/wp-content/uploads/images/2001/Beautiful-Pink-Eyes-Anime-Girl-Images-540x303.jpg[/img] [color=00746b]Quote: “You've gotta dance like there's nobody watching, Love like you'll never be hurt, Sing like there's nobody listening, And live like it's heaven on earth.” ― William W. Purkey[/color] [color=f9ad81]Age[/color] 17 [color=f9ad81]Gender[/color] Female from birth [color=f9ad81]Sexual/Romantic Preference[/color] Straight (is that what you mean) [color=f9ad81]School Year[/color] High school: 3rd year Pro/Anti/[b]Neutral[/b] [color=c4df9b]Colour likes[/color] Lime green Blue Red [color=ed145b]Colour Dislikes[/color] Pink Orange Brown [color=f9ad81]Fears[/color] Drowning Being lonely for the rest of her life [color=f9ad81]Personality[/color] Loving Caring Over-protective Trustworthy [color=f9ad81]Biography[/color] She parents died in a car crash when she was 8 and she has been living with her aunt for the rest of the years, with her 6 sisters and her one brother. She is the 7th daughter of the 7th daughter. [color=fdc68a]Extras[/color] She can turn into any animal other then a lion, tiger or bear, OH MY! [/quote] So. There's a number of problems here. At least, for me anyway. Considering the character skeleton and characters are generally my responsibility here - even though they require the others acceptance as well - I get a little irritated when my effort goes ignored and one does not follow the coding that I laid out for you. First, I would like you to code it properly, centered with headers and only ONE colour please. Only headings get colours like stated in the skeleton coding. Second, in the opening paragraph for the characters I stated that you 'need not post more than a single paragraph for any section' but that means that you must have a full paragraph for the personality and bio. Other things are fine to list, though when a character is meant to not be 2D, there must be some level of depth and that requires a tad bit more effort. Third, would you mind sending me a writing sample with this character so that I may assess if you will be able to reach the posting requirements? And on a side note, I'm the harshest of the three here so do not fear the others.