Hm... okay, let's see here... [@VitaVitaAR]: -Some sort of... Well, height would be useful. A general estimate, at the very minimum, would help immensely. -I think history could be fleshed out a tad more; another paragraph or so should do it. Things like place of birth, where she lived, and all that other stuff would do quite nicely here. And... I think that's all my comments. Now, [@The Roman07], that's not necessarily the case now, seeing as how I've still gotta run checks over again. As for critiques... -Can I ask if you could separate the images from the text so it isn't a giant jump from looking from the middle of one sentence to the other half of it? -'WolfBeast'... That's... Okay, so what difference is there between a transformed werewolf and one of these, then? I'm not seeing one, and if someone's picking a race I need to flesh it out on my own to make it fit within the story as an established one. Eventually, of course, but still. That's all I can see as of right now. I think a party of 6 will do fine, but 7 is definitely pushing it. I think one slot will be available, considering how I project this in the near future. [@Tokki] Yes, I am COMPLETELY on board with that. Two posts in between makes for good pacing.