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[b]Name:[/b]Steven Stanley

[b]Nickname/Alias:[/b] Tim

[b]Age:[/b] 19

[b]Gender:[/b] Male

[b]Appearance:[/b] Steven has somewhat messy black hair. Standing at an average height, he’s pretty normal looking. He’s the kind of the guy you don’t really remember for looks, if he didn’t have an eye patch. But he does, so he’s pretty distinctive as the guy with an eye patch.

[b]Location:[/b] California 

[b]Settlement:[/b] Drifter 

[b]Profession:[/b] Part time lazy guy

[b]Skills:[/b] Steven learns pretty quickly. He also runs fast and is pretty good at camping, hiking and fishing, and a bit of climbing. Pretty agile. Somewhat good at cooking. He’s really good at keeping calm and almost never panics, mainly because he’s kind of an idiot. Untrained but pretty good at sneaking. Basically, he’s physically fit, runs fast and does a bit of stealth. He’s also the kind of guy who can do anything if he tried, probably.

[b]Powers:[/b] Steven has 2 invisible ‘cubes of influence’ which he does stuff in. They’re intangible and can be controlled telekinetically, and if Steven moves, the cubes move with him. He can also tune his sight to his cubes in order to see out of them. Additionally, he can teleport objects within one cube to the other cube. He can transport any one thing he can identify, so he can be selective about it.

[b]Weaknesses:[/b] His cubes of influence are fairly small, around 15 cubic centimetres, so the objects he can teleport are limited in size. Furthermore, depending on the size of the object, it takes energy to move it, so his use of that power isn’t infinite. Objects he can transport are also reasonably limited further. He can only transport things he can sense, and he can’t transport parts of an object or an object that’s part of another object. For example, he can take a key off a key chain, but he can’t take a clip out of a pistol, because if it’s loaded then it’s a ‘part’ of the gun. Also, when he’s seeing out of his cubes, he can’t see out of his own eyes. This weakness is, however, partially circumvented by the fact that he lost his eye a while back (more of that in the back story). He can use his missing left eye to see out of one of the cubes, and since there isn’t much reason not to, he does it most of the time.

[b]Weapons:[/b] None, really.

[b]Armor/Clothing:[/b] Travelling clothes. Reasonably thick pants, walking shoes, jacket and shirt. Also a pretty big back pack.

[b]Equipment and Supplies:[/b] A large backpack with camping gear including a portable stove thing, a small tent with tent pegs and sleeping bag. He also carries spare clothes, 7 cans of food that might last him a few days and a 2 L bottle of water. He doesn’t carry too much, though, as he has to walk long distances, and he normally scavenges when he runs low. Also carrying his 3DS and phone, but they’re both turned off because there isn’t much power in the post apocalypse. Also has a lighter.

[b]Personality:[/b] Steven is pretty lazy and kind of an idiot. That’s not to say he lacks intelligence, because he’s actually pretty smart. He can practically do anything he puts his mind to. The problem is, he doesn’t put his mind to much. It’s kind of because he can do a lot of things, but he gets bored pretty easily and goes back and forth. 

The reason Steven’s an idiot is because he does most things with reasons that most people don’t come up with because, you know, common sense. He usually ignores danger if what he wants leads to it, but he often comes out unscathed through a mix of luck and skill.

Other than that, he can be described as a happy-go-lucky guy, satisfied to cruise through life at his own pace, not having many aspirations. He’s often seen with a smile, though, and he doesn’t take much seriously. Even then, he often thinks about his situations and what he should do. Keeping a dopey exterior, he manages to make his feats mostly look like coincidence. Always relaxed, a lucky idiot.

[b]History:[/b] Steven was somewhat normal. ‘Was’ is the keyword. He had no real aspirations for his entire life and was mildly curious about the alien invasion and subsequent combat scenario. However, rather than be involved with the resulting apocalypse, his family isolated themselves from the outside world. Steven was content to sit still for a while and wait for the whole thing to blow over, really. But then the virus strengthened his powers and everything changed.

He was playing games one day when he was suddenly struck by a massive sensory overload which made him overly sensitive to everything. His power, which’d been extremely small but present, mutated when the virus affected it, and it went out of control. After a few hours of pain, he woke up to find his room had box shaped holes in it and a bunch of stuff missing. He was suddenly aware of 2 invisible cubes that followed him. Unfortunately for him, his ps3 was gone and so was his eye.

After he stopped the bleeding, he began training his power and getting used to not having a left eye anymore. He found that he could still use the cubes to ‘see’ with his left eye, so he guessed that it was still around somewhere. As it turns out, his family was still kind of fine, but they didn’t want to go out. Steven did and found some stuff from his room to be outside, but his ps3, his eye and a few other things were nowhere to be found.

Being the only outdoorsman of the family, Steven was experienced in travelling, so he packed his bags and prepared to set out into the world in order to find his ps3, his eye and the other bits and pieces he’s missing (he started around a month ago from where the story starts).

[b]Other:[/b] Likes cats
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