[quote=Double] Expanded on Dawn's backstory. By that I mean I actually gave him more motivation and a proper goal in life. [/quote] -nods- Good stuff, I like it. As for your three, Wernher, I'm definitely liking number two. :) There is a lack of mages on the team, and having both a sharp young unicorn and a wise deer shaman will make us very well rounded (and, to be perfectly honest, I'm not a fan of asshole characters). EDIT: If you decide to roll with #2, I'll PM you some of my ideas for magic they'll come across that she/he might have already studied, or at least heard of. We'll discuss.