[@boomlover] haha I'm glad I could help. Just always ask yourself - how would my character react? What would he say/do? Where would he go and how would we go about doing it? Would he react to Isabeau toning her bitchiness down? Does he realize he doesnt even know anyones name? The flicker off the gold in her eye, did he see it? How would he have reacted to when Jade attacked Edict? How would he have reacted to any of them? Does he have any injuries that he might ask Tirarrian to look at? And what about the dwarf? Did he get a look at him? It's hard to keep all of these in mind, especially when you can't actually see it right in front of you.  But they're all crucial points in creative writing. :) I'll always be here to help everyone out. You are also leaving on Tuesday, perhaps there may be time for more than one post :)