[@Ammokkx] - A very good point raised about  place in the CS to put down your characters abilities, I will add that so you can edit that in. Secondly Dreamselfy is okay however it is still quite anime-ish. If you could find either an artwork or something to go with that. I understand you may like the outfit etc. so I am happy for that link to be there as a reference but I would prefer a description or artwork there that is less cartoony, currently I am led to believe your character has no nose and her eyes take up a quarter of the front of her head.