[@DocTachyon]
"[b]It's good. I got a few things I'd like to ask you to do, though.
-Tell me where Freetown is. California? NY?
-Either cut down his Shock Arrows to 4, or increase their charge time. Also, add a number of times he can recharge with the quiver before needing to return to base to get more power.
-The Hull arrows are cool, and you don't have to change this, just wanna lay some facts down. The damage a bow does is more based on draw length, how long the bow is, and how much draw weight their is. You could have an arrow made from the densest material in the universe, and if you fired it from a normal bow it would just kinda fall out of the bow. You gotta have a more powerful bow to allow you to fire more dense arrows, and in turn, deal more damage. Of course, i have no idea what your perception of how dense alien hull is, so whatever.
-Just, please cut out 'Professor Paleo"... Please..."[/b]

Freetown is around mid Oregon, maybe south Oregon.  I can have him meet up with the California people, though.  I was trying to have him at the edge of where they might go.
Ok, I'll double charge time and add a max of 8 recharges before he has to recharge his quiver.
The hull material is actually lighter and stronger, like Titanium, so it can keep a sharper edge and penetrate armor better.
Ok, I changed it to generic raiders.