[quote=@TheUnknowable]
[@DocTachyon]
"[b]It's good. I got a few things I'd like to ask you to do, though.
-Tell me where Freetown is. California? NY?
-Either cut down his Shock Arrows to 4, or increase their charge time. Also, add a number of times he can recharge with the quiver before needing to return to base to get more power.
-The Hull arrows are cool, and you don't have to change this, just wanna lay some facts down. The damage a bow does is more based on draw length, how long the bow is, and how much draw weight their is. You could have an arrow made from the densest material in the universe, and if you fired it from a normal bow it would just kinda fall out of the bow. You gotta have a more powerful bow to allow you to fire more dense arrows, and in turn, deal more damage. Of course, i have no idea what your perception of how dense alien hull is, so whatever.
-Just, please cut out 'Professor Paleo"... Please..."[/b]

Freetown is around mid Oregon, maybe south Oregon.  I can have him meet up with the California people, though.  I was trying to have him at the edge of where they might go.
Ok, I'll double charge time and add a max of 8 recharges before he has to recharge his quiver.
The hull material is actually lighter and stronger, like Titanium, so it can keep a sharper edge and penetrate armor better.
Ok, I changed it to generic raiders.
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 Alright, accepted.
[quote=@Nytefall]


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The powers are a little much... Turning people to glass? Summoning monsters? Giving people mental disorders? 'The Power of The Old Ones' sounds like in some scenarios it could be the finger of god. You're gonna need to limit it more in some way and tone it down a bit.

[@DocTachyon]
 Not really, its as random as can be. 
I said evil entities i never said they were actual physical monsters, they may not even hurt them could just be an annoying noise or a bunny that will follow around the person swearing at them.

The Whole character is based around randomness, i am more then happy to have his powers do nothing of use against an opponent.
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I don't like random characters for one of the many reasons I don't like Superman. One day they're near useless and the next day they're capable of destroying planets. I don't like this power because if gives you a pretty damn good chance for an insta-kill.

[quote=@LHG100]
Sure thing Tachyon, consider the power stealing rekt. Should I change more stuff or is it A-OK now?

Edit: Is his healing too much too, or did you just meant "In addition"? I really want the healing but I can tone it down some.
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Looks good for now. Consider it accepted.