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Aye. Ie am.
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lright, was making sure since there was no OOC activity or discussion and such since I announced the IC was going to be done by sunday at the latest hopefully.
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lright, was making sure since there was no OOC activity or discussion and such since I announced the IC was going to be done by sunday at the latest hopefully.


We're just waiting. And besides, no one wants to be 'the guy who floods the OOC'
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Yeah, plus I was at a friend's house and just got back like 30 minutes ago
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<Snipped quote by ViolentViolet>

We're just waiting. And besides, no one wants to be 'the guy who floods the OOC'


Yeah, that's my job!

Nah but seriously I'm here, just waiting it out. Playing some Smash.
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Yo. Mind if I join you guys?
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@Feral
Not at all
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*ignore this*
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Interested! I'll be generating a bio in the next few hours.
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Almost done, searching for a picture so bare with me. :)

Nailed it hopefully.
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@Gin
Just a few comments before you're actually done with him so I don't crush you too bad here.

A) A shaman - in the sense it is in this world - is a spiritual healer with the ability to commune with the dead - normally just the nice ones and you can't really inherit 'shaman blood' from a parent. It's a skill, not a blood line.

B) The Kingsguard are chosen specifically for their fighting ability, and do not have children, so he wouldn't be anyone's 'successor' to anything. The Kingsgard are not allowed children either, so if you were ever found to be fucking any woman at all, they can easily exile you for going against the code of honor.

C) Your personality is a little short and 2D; you could flesh him out a little bit more.

D) His biography has no information on his past at all. That has to be changed, since bio's are a requirement and I don't accept 'does not remember' as an answer. He's 32; if he doesn't remember stuff he's brain dead. It should describe how he actually has any powers, since he's human and they traditionally don't have any powers at all.

E) What's a 'First Scout'? The Kingsguard doesn't scout much of anything at all honestly, so I don't really understand that part.

He doesn't sound much like a Kingsguard as you've descried him. On a side note; Jaime would actually just kill him if he tried to go against him
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@pure493
Awesome. Was there any specfic position you wanted?
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I did figure I was not going cut it. I am not a skilled writer enough to maintain a high level character such as that which you want of me. Hmmmh, besides as of shamans there are many interpretations of them.
Anyway, I wouldn't be able to muster the strenght to rp this. Sorry, I was too optimistic and ignorant.
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I did figure I was not going cut it. I am not a skilled writer enough to maintain a high level character such as that which you want of me. Hmmmh, besides as of shamans there are many interpretations of them.
Anyway, I wouldn't be able to muster the strenght to rp this. Sorry, I was too optimistic and ignorant.


Hey now, no need to be like that. Nearly everyone here has a little list of traits along with their couple sentences on the personality - I did it lol. So just a few actual traits, things that conflict and maybe one weakness is fine.

And you never answered my questions :/
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No no, I am not sored out. It is just that I am realistic about my ability ey. I won't be able to make good long posts and follow the lines of epic structured rps of this level and even if I involves and invested in this I would do poorly and falter sooner than later bringing down people with my level. :O

No worries really as I said I am being real with myself. :)
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@Gin If you insist, man. Personally I find it better to try and fail, but you do bring up the valid point that there are other people that you could affect. Whatever you want, though.

In other news, I know this is probably the worst time to bring this up, potentially ever, but all the really good RP's I've been in have had some people connected pre-RP. I think that this kind of setting is ripe for that stuff, considering fate exists and magic is real and all that. Of course, since we're so close to starting, that's just a suggestion.
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No no, I am not sored out. It is just that I am realistic about my ability ey. I won't be able to make good long posts and follow the lines of epic structured rps of this level and even if I involves and invested in this I would do poorly and falter sooner than later bringing down people with my level. :O

No worries really as I said I am being real with myself. :)


Hey, if you need help, I can give a few pointers and link some tutorials for you. Iwiyuld quite like to see as many people in this as I can and I think you're gut in particular has some potential.
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@Gin Hey, I won't be writing long posts either. In fact, I quite hope that this rp won't be of such a high level. xD I don't think you'll bring anyone down, really. ^^
Violet is a bit strict with the character creation, but is actually pretty indulgent with other aspects of the rp, including writing style and such. ^^
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@Gin Hey, I won't be writing long posts either. In fact, I quite hope that this rp won't be of such a high level. xD I don't think you'll bring anyone down, really. ^^
Violet is a bit strict with the character creation, but is actually pretty indulgent with other aspects of the rp, including writing style and such. ^^


Look, if anyone thinks I am holding some kind of pity me banner or an Violet is mean grudges you are all wrong I still like Violet so far. I was honestly not prepared for those (to many) minor changes. I am just not, hmmm, the kind of guy that handles my errors and ignorance too well even though I know am a bit like that. :P
My final wrapper here is due to amazing support a big thanks for the encouragement, but I will still decline and back out. :P
Thanks for the love once more but it is truly alright you folks.
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