[quote=@Blizz]
Sure,I tried spacing it by putting a gap between the lines
[/quote]

No, I mean like spaces between words. It looks kinda crushed. How about this?:

[hider=Jack the Half-Brood]
[h3][b][u][color=red]"I'll tear you into ribbons"[/color][/u][/b][/h3]

Name: Jack (Surname? Dynasty?)

Age: 12 (Rather young, is he not?)

Appearance: (Whatever he looks like, maybe a paragraph or two if you can't find a picture)

Gender: Male

Race: Half-Brood - A human crossed with a specific kind of spider, the Shadowleg (Needs more detail. What exactly is a Half-Brood? How was it crossed with a Spider? And wouldn't he be an [url=https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Arachne]Arachne[/url])

Side: Neutral

Weapons: 
Katar: A strange kind of dagger used as though one is punching with it.
[img]http://i.imgur.com/uCUIVXX.jpg[/img]

Abilities: 
invisibility - Jack can turn himself invisible for a short period of time
night vision - Jack can see in the dark as if it were day
Extra Limbs - Jack has extra limbs that extend from his back that can be used like his normal hands

Powers(he learned these):
Dark Spawn - Jack can summon creatures of the shadow (What do you mean by this? How many? What do they look like? Etc.)
Evil gaze - Jack can hypnotize foes that look into his eyes (For how long?)

Talents: 
Stealth - Jack is naturally good at sneaking around, hiding from sight and generally going undetected
Armour-breaker - Jack understands anatomy enough to know which parts of his enemies are weakest and will apply this knowledge to his fighting.

Personality: Clever, Sly, Funny, Smart, Calm, Sadistic (Any weak points to his personality? He's rather Gary Stu at the moment.)

Backstory: (This is required, unfortunately.)

Extras:
Very fast at moving.
Has not chosen a side.
Sadistic and enjoys making his foes bleed (Is this not better as a personality trait?)
(Straight? Gay? Bi? Asexual?)
[/hider]

So yeah, this needs to be a bit more balanced and needs a lot more detail. I don't mean to come across as rude, I just want you to have a well-thought out and planned character.