[@Satsuki] Please elaborate on the nature of his combat style, and explain what exactly the warrior's prowess skill does, because as-is it just seems like a plot skill, which is a no-no. Also, keep in mind that Stone Body won't really help you against monsters, given the absurd gap between normal humans and monsters, and the fact that the baseline for Guild Members is at the same rank (your body's physical defense will be the same as Archer Loli's). Where does he keep the booze jars, is there a bag? [quote]when a spell circle is smeared.[/quote] This is semantic, but magic doesn't exist. Not any time in the past few eras, at least. When one of you rediscovers it, it'll be a big deal. [quote]112 different assassinations where he killed anyone in his way.[/quote] Either remove this, or tone down the number. It's just too much.