>@Optio Oh, that's what you mean. Nevermind then. Looks good to me. I thought the "I.EL" bit was suppose to be an additional part of your ability. I prefer a bit more depth just so characters don't seem too random. You know, have a history that matches up to their personality. And personality should be something that those who loosely know you would describe you as, and what those who are closer to you would describe you as. Granted I'm the only sort of guy who'd hark on text count, but this is casual dammit, I have standards! I'm not gunna be hardcore about it or nothing, but ya best be able to go pro when yo told so!
I've updated it in the Characters tab.
The History is a bit longer and ties into her personality a nicely (I think). I didn't make the history too specific because I don't know very much about this world and didn't want to make assumptions :D
Her personality is a little heavy towards her ambition and determination but that is what will dominate her early posts, other stuff will naturally develop as she meets people and finds interest in what they are doing etc.