[quote=Sixsmith] At least they're nice people, for the most part.I mean, Hayden's line is extremely far back, so it's rather hard to cross it. But, once you do, you should start praying... hard to every god/goddess you can think of.Hotheaded isn't even the word. More like extremely vindictive.I think I did it because I'm starting to really doubt my characters. Like, do I even give them enough room to develop? Are they even compelling and dynamic? I keep fearing that my characters are extremely static and don't move. I might be taking it a step too far when I add flaws like that, though. I might not even be giving him room to grow regardless... ._.I don't know anymore. I mean, it's good to doubt yourself and make mistakes, as it's the only way to improve, but I dunno if I'm being illogical about it. [/quote] Well... I for one really love your characters. And even if characters are static, there's always some direction to go, and whether that character development is accomplished is determined in the IC. There's no way of truly knowing how much character development will occur.