[quote=@AquaAzura] Here's my first character I should have my second one up later tonight or tomorrow! [center] Username: AquaAzura Name: The Silver Bard (nicknamed Silver or Bard) Age: 27 Gender: Male Class: Bard Rank: Member House: Tosen Weapons: None Appearance: [img]http://sekaiju.atlus.co.jp/chara/big/img/bard2.jpg[/img] Personality: A casual yet mysterious man whose voice and lute playing inspires the most exhausted of soldiers to keep fighting to the bone and to inspire the most doubtful of lovers to marriage if commissioned a song of love, and to lift the hearts of the most downtrodden of groups with a ballad of strength. He's a terrible flirt and romantic but ironically unlike his songs he is clumsy with his words when alone with another person and gets flustered by most innocent of touches. He abhors violence and hates carrying weapons and tombs even if he can't use them, and he's intimidated by magic especially dark magic, healing magic being the only magic he can handle being around. Short Biography: The Silver Bard was born in an abandon building to a common whore. He was never given a name nor will he ever get one. When he was old enough to sing people were captivated by his songs that even at a young age inspired others and makes others feel the young Bastards hardships. When he was old enough to hold a lute he was taken in by a member of the house of Tosen, where when he gotten older he received the nickname The Silver Bard, due to his odd silver hair for his young age. He was well loved amongst the house members for his songs and voice. But he will sent out to make more use of his musical influence to inspire those in the fight against the monsters. Also a high ranking house member wanted him out of there due his daughter having her eyes on the Bard. Other: "Let's dance!" [/center] [/quote] I guess he's accepted, but I'd like you to proof read a few things first. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes in there. As for your Dark Mage, Ill think about accepting her. [quote=@Kal-El] [img]https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/68/fb/2b/68fb2b66ce8206d16b96b31a9f9ec13a.jpg[/img] [b]Username:[/b] [i]Kal-El[/i] [b] Name:[/b] [i]Aleyn Aseryo[/i] [b] Age:[/b] [i]22[/i] [b]Gender:[/b] [i]Male[/i] [b]Class:[/b] [i]Myrmidon[/i] [b]Rank:[/b] [i]Member[/i] [b]House:[/b] [i]Aseryo[/i] [b]Weapons:[/b] [i]Aleyn wields dual silver single sided swords akin to Katana but wider at the blade. For now he has deemed them as the Blades of Justice.[/i] [b]Personality:[/b] [i]Aleyn is very dedicated and determined to his career to maintain peace, sometimes employing illegal and morally dubious tactics (like torture) but ultimately for the good of world. Despite his dark past and serious work, Aleyn has displayed a sense of humor. Although possessing great hate and anger towards the corrupted, he has proven himself a very caring and selfless person, constantly putting his life on the line to save innocent lives and bringing the most dangerous individuals to justice for society's protection. He has proved to have a great love for humanity, which was instilled by his mentors. He has a very dynamic personality. His passion and intensity make him strong, although he has always had difficulty finding direction in life. Aleyn is also very skeptical and is described as a very complicated man. A very few can discern what is he thinking.[/i] [b]Short Biography:[/b] [i]Aleyn was born as a son of the Aseryo house, a prestige not many could honor. From a young age, the boy was taught in the art of war to turn him into a suitable general and future Lord. War was always necessary in these lands and they hammered it into his head except his mentors always made sure he understand the love of humanity. Aleyn was smarter then most thought leading him to have an understanding of the human nature and upholding justice. He had seen men and women die in combat to his adversaries and it helped shape him in wanting to finally establish peach in the lands. It would take years, he knew, but nonetheless Aleyn would try. Now with two prominent Houses coming together, he believed this could be the key shaping this world into one of justice.[/i] [b]Other: [/b] [i]"My swords are tools for justice."[/i] [/quote] Everything seems fine here except for his name. Sariwon is an oriental nation, so if he was born into the House hell have to have a Japanese/Chinese/Korean/etc first name. ^^;