[@Remipa Awesome]

All and all looks good. There's just a couple things I'm going to point out. 

He has the same last name as my character. You don't have to change it but could you throw something in the sign up about there not being any relation between them? (unless you'd like to plot out some ideas involving them being related) 

There's some grammatical errors but I don't stress over those much. 

CO-GM will be sending you a message to bring you up to speed on what's going on. Things might get a tad confusing since the rp is being moved from another site but feel free to ask questions.