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Welcome, All!
[This is a Placeholder Title!]

Hi my names Pox. I had an interest check up a few days ago, but it wasn't really.. well wasn't constructed well, not enough interest.
I decided to go for something different. I hope we get some interest this time.





Note: I will always wait 3 days, before deleting a post..
I am working in something rather big, this will still be up, if anyone is interested, but im going to work on something, that a much broader audience could play upon.
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Way too many commas.
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Way too many commas.


I want feedback, yes. But if it's to post on grammatical errors, please PM me.
Anything feedback wise.. like would it be common sense to just privately message the owner? Considering he's looking at Subs each day to see if anyone is interested.

When I meant feedback, I meant feedback on the plot (Highly Undeveloped) and anything to do with the ACTUAL RP.
Not the posts grammatical issues, I can fix that myself.
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@Pox I'm gonna be honest. I don't think you can.

Anyhow, you asked for feedback and I delivered. I apologize if it isn't what you wanted to hear, and good luck with your RP.
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@Pox I'm gonna be honest. I don't think you can.

Anyhow, you asked for feedback and I delivered. I apologize if it isn't what you wanted to hear, and good luck with your RP.


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