[@floodtalon] Of course! 

Anyway, I couldn't help but notice a couple of things about him. The fact that he's a sociopath is alright, however don't feel bad if he's seen as a liability by authority, warranted or not. It's the path you chose after all. 

Alright, concerning history: The first part is Kakashi. Completely. Now this alone isn't a problem, until we add in historical context. This is an era of peace and Naruto turned the world into a fantasy-like BS utopia where friendship prevails. Of course we're not that ridiculous, but mentality did change and camaraderie is seen as just as important as the mission (unless it's secret operations like N.C.4's, but those aren't really disgraceful considering they're not made public usually). So this portion is a bit iffy. I'd also like to point out that sure he can be quite unique and all that jazz (aren't we all?), but is he THAT invaluable? Shinobi are easily interchangeable, even if they have a Kekkei Genkai. If he's already a possible liability, I don't think superiors would see him as [i]that[/i] valuable. The issue is mainly his importance. If you want we can discuss this more privately. 

Now moves. Generally solid move set, nothing complicated. I would like to make one thing clear: He's chuunin for a reason, mastering a 3rd element wouldn't be all that simple for him. I say, you choose one to be the 'third' element, one he'll have a harder time mastering than the second (which is just slightly weaker than wind). This leads to weaker jutsu and slower progression. Is that clear enough? 

This review seems long but these are minor details. Find a solution to history to make a little more believable and apply jutsu restriction and you're game!