Hi Everyone! Been wanting to do this rp for some time, but was talking with GM about character sheet and all. Curious what you guys think of it?

[hider= Lily Orzak] 

Name: Lily Orzak
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Mastery: Nightshade
Path: Alchemist
Rank: Adept

Appearance: Lily has long black hair that falls down to her shoulders. She is somewhat tan and has dark blue eyes. While she looks like she'd have no strength, looking very dainty at 5'3", she actually has some strength, which she uses to her advantage. Lily typically wears long purple dresses with a belt around her waist. Her dress has some open space on the bottom, making it easier for mobility and to hide things under her dress. She wears knee high black boots with laces all along the boots.

Equipment: Lily always keeps a dagger hidden on her, usually under her dress with another one hidden inside the left side of her boot. She uses this for defense and in order to obtain blood for use in various recipes, using their blood to perform a hex/curse on them. She has a book strapped to her belt, which she uses to take notes of the various places she has been to and for recipes. She also also a small pouch on her belt which she can use to store ingredients for her various potions and spells.

Demeanor: Lily is very curious about the world around her, which is why she has a book to write everything and anything about what she encounters. She strives to learn all that she can about being an alchemist. She can be helpful when she wants to, and becomes fixated on new things when she discovers them.

Story: Lily was born into nobility. She also had a brother that was 3 years older than her. When she was young, her brother was overcome with an illness at the age of 19. Doctors from all over tried everything they could to heal her brother. Lily herself tried to save her brother with the powers of alchemy she had, but to no avail. He eventually died as a result of the illness. Realizing she was powerless to do anything to save her brother, she decided to leave her family behind, exploring the world and gaining knowledge that would have saved her brother. During her travels, she met someone that mentored her for some time. The mentor taught her everything that she could and mentioned that if Lily wanted to further her powers, she would have to go to the Academy to learn more. Lily then went to the Academy, where she continued to study, becoming an Adept, until something happened.... [/hider]