[@knighthawk] Your appearance description is much too short as well as the personality section. Take a look at other CS's and compare it to yours. 

[quote]Weapon, tool or object name:
Purple gourd
Weapon, tool or object type:
Weapon
Description:
One gallon of liquid poison worn his hip. Just like the one on his back, he infuses it with chakra in order to manipulate the water of the poison as a weapon or blend the poison into his water gourd at a 1:1-10:1 ratio. The poison itself is a paralytic agent absorbed through the skin. At minimum it numbs the skin and effects the abilities of opponents with a full body sensation of 'pins and needles'. At worst case, a direct hit in the mouth or the like, the chest locks up and the enemy suffocates to death as the lungs refuse to oxygenate.[/quote]

Oh okay, it's a one hit kill if you put it in someones mouth. That's a no, there's no 1 hit kills on jutsu or weaponry. 

Also I am not sure on the KG. It seems okay, but then as a water shinobi you can always just make water come out of the ground and convert that to chakra. That basically gives you infinite chakra.. so.. you need to clarify a bit.