[@Belwicket] I get that it's a mental ability, but my point is that if it was normal, Jean Grey wouldn't be in x-men. And I still feel as if it should be explained. How she got it, did she always have it? Things like this, plus all you've listed should be in her cs somewhere. I do like .her, but like I said, she's lacking. Her mental ability is the -only- thing that makes her stand out, otherwise, she is your stereo typical halfling rogue. Even looking back at [@KazeXDZ], the cs is rather short, but there is something about it that makes the character stand out. That makes you feel for him, and also things are explained. While I'd like the cs to be longer, I accepted the character because of this. 

This is still just a casual rp, but I'd like a bit more effort in the cs.  To me, it seems like something that was just put together, rushed and with little effort. I apologize if this is a harsh comment. 

[@The Harbinger of Ferocity] your character is accepted. Whenever you're ready, copy him into the character tab, and feel free to join the rp.

For this rp, I'm looking for characters that wouldn't necessarily blend in with the background. I understand that personality and how the person portrays their character through posts has a lot to do with this, but I do feel that with the characters we have in the character tab, each brings something special or unique to the table in their cs alone. In my opinion, weaknesses and flaws give a bigger edge to a character. They help to make them seem real, and make for great character development which is usually beautiful to watch and a lot of fun to write out. I am looking for more than one paragraph per post, though I do understand that there are some circumstances where it can't be helped. As mentioned in the first ooc post, my aim is to create something amazing. This isn't directed at anyone in particular, but to everyone in general. That being said, anyone who is currently writing or who looks to write with us here, I ask that an effort is made to stay in this direction. If this is too advanced for you, I do understand and again, I apologize if I offend anyone. It's extremely early for me, and I haven't gotten much sleep. I created this rp with this standard in mind, and I want to stick to it. The first chapter of the rp went beautifully and I'm extremely excited, especially with all of these new characters, to continue the story.