Alright, [@WilsonTurner] I would like a least a little blurb about some things Vin commonly used his power to do. This gives us a scope of exactly how far a reach he has (for everyone to see, not just us GMs) and how much relative control he has. I'm not rejecting the power, but if you keep it so secretive it's easy to sort of pull a solution to a problem out of nowhere, that no one could predict. I'm not saying I think you'll do that, but it's more fun and fair to everyone to have your cards on the table. Then, if you have an idea for future evolutions of the power (he learns a skill or discovers a new use for his power) you can talk to a Gm about it, but it's better to keep your initial skills clear. Other than that he looks pretty good. I appreciate your use of memes, and I would like to see a bit more about your character's personality/mannerisms. How did his past affect him? Does he have trust issues, or fear of fire, or abandonment issues? Nervous ticks? Self soothing habits? These all help give depth to a character. ^_^