[@Whoami],

That's fair enough. As I already said, I didn't want to seem arrogant, I only expressed my thoughts regarding the plot and what I personally think is possible and impossible. Perhaps I should have expressed myself differently so I suppose it's a good time to bring up that I'm not a native English speaker. 
My additions were meant to be proposals to you so it is up to you whether they are implemented or not. Thank you for elaborating on your thought process, I didn't see it that way. Now that that's out of the way, I'll be working on a character sheet, that is if I'm still welcome after this little "scuffle".