[@Write] Alright bro, let me just give you a few pointers before either a colleague or myself reviews you: 

-You're being that ONE GUY with the different CS. That alone isn't a BIG issue, however it does bring one problem: We have it organized in a specific manner to make it easier for us to check on certain information. Yoshua's CS' are cool and all but they mostly fit his RP's. The biggest problem I have is the Canon Just not being sorted by Rank. Plus it literally only takes five minutes to transfer information from this CS to the other. The special traits can be put in fighting style (chakra levels aren't too relevant in this RP for many reasons). 

-Personality is short. Doesn't have to be massive, but it is shorter than many of your custom jutsu, like c'mon.