Clearly the other CS left a poor taste in everyone's mouth. I apologize for that and offer you the correct Cs. I apologize for any ill will that may have come attached to said CS. [hider=Yuen Uchiha] [center][img] http://safebooru.org//images/1310/6cea84fa185c92ef7d86e39b21a297aa1020a763.png?1363550[/img] [i]“One peek won’t hurt… Trust me.”[/i] [b] Yuen sports a relatively average frame, good muscle definition. She is approaching five foot six. Yuen has a sharp facial structure a small pointed nose and an edged chin ending her face abruptly. She has focused brown eyes and perfectly clear skin. Yuen’s chest is developed and she has pretty noticeable abdominal muscles. She has a few scars along her back, mostly from kunai and the sort. Her arms sport similar scars and by the time one would reach her hands, they would meet bandages. She practices plucking incoming kunai and shuriken out of the air regularly and thusly bandages her hands regularly. Yuen’s legs are wrapped up in bandages as well, to make sure she has full flexibility in a combat situation. [/b][/center] [u][b]Personnel files.[/b][/u] [i]Access only by security personnel with a C3 clearance.[/i] [indent]【[U]Full Name[/U]】 [I]Yuen Uchiha [/I] 【[U]Alias[/U]】 [i]N/A[/i] 【[U]Age[/U]】 [i]17[/i] 【[U]Sex[/U]】 [i]Female[/i] 【[U]Sexuality[/U]】 [i]Homosexual[/i] 【[U]Birthplace[/U]】 [i]Konoha[/i] 【[U]Bloodline[/U]】 [i]Uchiha[/i] 【[U]Rank[/U]】 [i]Chūnin[/i][/indent] [u][b]Psych. report.[/b][/u] [i]Medical secrecy applies.[/i] [indent]【[U]Personality[/U]】 [i] Yuen is great at quite a few things, being positive looking out for her squad, properly prioritizing assignments and decisions. However one thing she reliably poor with is being cautious. Some believe it is because of the Yama blood that runs through her veins, however when it comes to realizing danger to her own self Yuen has been notably lacking since a young age. This has caused her to run into overwhelming odds more than once and luckily escape with her life. That being said it can be that same trait that is Yuen’s greatest strength. Her reckless abandon has more than once taken an enemy off guard and provided the slight edge she needs to overwhelm them. In social settings Yuen is typically popular. She is a good listener and as such doesn’t draw much attention to herself as she does to others. For this reason Yuen has never been out of friends. Even when her family had just moved from the land of stone to the hidden leaf village Yuen made fast friends. Yuen has never been a romantic, when she has need for a partner then she finds herself one. Some find this to be her most unappealing social trait, others love it. Yuen doesn’t bother herself too much where each and every person places themselves in that spectrum. [/i] 【[U]History[/U]】 [i] Yuen was born into the Uchiha clan to a tired mother and an absentee father. She would live her life under the shadow of her father and see even less of him. Yuen’s mother was a Kunoichi heralded by the rest of the clan as one of the best the clan ever had. The other children would always tell Yuen of how jealous they were that she had such prestigious parents, seemingly everyone knew of her parent’s legacy, which should’ve made Yuen proud of her name, but instead she just found anger in it. Around the time Yuen turned ten years old her mother began to become frustrated in her and her inability to unlock the Sharingan. So one day her mother brought her into the living room sat her down and cast a Genjutsu on her. Yuen doesn’t remember much from the day, but when she awoke night had fallen, her ankle was broken and the search party had found her alone in the woods by a stream with the Sharingan. Yuen since that day trained under her mother’s close personal supervision, very rarely interacting with the rest of the clan. During this five year period she became something of a legend within the Uchiha clan though not quite due to her own efforts but for her mother’s strict regimen. Every day Yuen would sleep from 2-7 and train for the rest of her waking hours. But Yuen felt rage towards her mother, every time she looked at her, it was like an inconsolable itch that Yuen [i]had[/i] to scratch. Yet everyday Yuen would practice her techniques on her mother, training with her, but would relent to avoid doing damage to her mother’s psyche. Every training session, the itch would only grow. Spending time in a four man cell was good for Yuen. She was given time to become comfortable interacting with other people, this along with her time with in the academy proved to strengthen Yuen’s social skills considerably. Perhaps to a certain extent it was because she could typically mold herself into a Yuen that whoever she had just met would like more. But when another person was fond of her, it gave Yuen a considerably warm feeling in her heart. Something she hadn’t quite experienced before under her mother’s tutelage. Three years after becoming a Genin saw Yuen’s rise to Chunin. She was a force to be reckoned with in the exams. Trapping her first two competitors in a Genjutsu long enough to end the fight. However in the finals she was up against a girl who seemed to be weary against this specific style of fighting. She didn’t meet Yuen’s eyes and instead looked at the space directly beside Yuen, this slowed her reaction time slightly, but allowed her to avoid getting caught in any sight based Jutsu. Yuen knew she would somehow have to take advantage of her opponent’s dulled reaction time. Having had some practice in Fuinjutsu up to that point, Yuen placed two seals on her lips each at a different point in the match, between dodging techniques. Yuen allowed herself to get closer to defeat. Taking a punch here and there, it looked bad for the Uchiha. Her opponent went in to finish the match, one palm strike to Yuen’s chin. However Yuen dodged the strike on the inside, grabbed her opponent by cheeks and kissed her deeply. By the time Yuen had pulled away her opponent hit the ground, unconscious. The match was her and ever since the Kiss of Death was born. But the past two years Yuen became more active in the clan and village’s community, becoming much more active in the field, whether it’s normal missions or tasks around the village needed. Or espionage missions involving taking out specific individuals, Yuen finally begun to make a name for herself. She after all, was a member of the Uchiha clan. [/i] 【[U]Family ties[/U]】 [i]Kyo Uchiha. She lives with Yuen and is the leading force in her life. Constantly pushing her to be a better killer and fighting machine. Yuen doesn’t hold a positive opinion of her mother. [/i] [b]Kyo Uchiha | Mother | 37, Lives with Yuen[/b] 【[U]Dreams and fears[/U]】 [i] Yuen simply wants to become the perfect incarnation of herself. She wants to reach a level of strength surpassing anyone that has been known in her clan and wishes to defeat any obstacle in her way [/i][/indent] [u][b]Combat reports.[/b][/u] [i]Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.[/i] 【[U]Fighting style[/U]】 [i]Describe shortly what your characters fighting style is.[/i] 【[U]Kekkei genkai, or bloodline limit[/U]】 [b][u]Bloodline limit name:[/u][/b] [i]Sharingan [/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i] The 2 Tomoe Sharingan allows a user to predict an enemy’s movement’s one step ahead, thusly a punch can be foreseen a Jutsu however cannot. She also uses it as a source of Hypnotization to interrogate and cast Genjutsu. Finally one may also use it in an attempt to copy a Jutsu. However Yuen would need to see that Jutsu performed at least twice, or she would’ve needed to determine that she was going to learn the technique prior to it being shown to her. [/i] [b][u]Strengths:[/u][/b] [i]The Sharingan can be an Uchiha’s greatest strength, helping to predict enemy movements and copying their techniques. It can also be used for interrogation purposes and casting strong Genjutsu on enemies undetected to those not using another Dojutsu. [/i] [b][u]Weaknesses:[/u][/b] [i]The Sharingan, while powerful can also be a spot of incredible over-zealousness and pride in some Uchiha. Those who rely on the technique too often find themselves without chakra often and being countered in their obvious nature. As easy as it is to lock one in a Genjutsu with eye contact, not making eye contact is just as easy.[/i] 【[U]Ninja techniques[/U]】 [u]A rank techniques:[/u] [i]N/A[/i] [u]B rank techniques:[/u] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Summoning:_Lightning_Flash_Blade_Creation] Kuchiyose: Raikō Kenka[/url][/i] [u]C rank techniques:[/u] [i] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Manipulating_Windmill_Triple_Blades] Sōfūshasan no Tachi [/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Great_Fireball_Technique] Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu [/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Phoenix_Sage_Fire_Technique] Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu [/url] [url= http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Crow_Clone_Technique] Karasu Bunshin no Jutsu[/url] [/i] [u]D-E rank techniques:[/u] [i] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Manipulated_Shuriken_Technique] Sōshuriken no Jutsu [/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Shadow_Shuriken_Technique] Kage Shuriken no Jutsu[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Demonic_Illusion:_Hell_Viewing_Technique] Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu[/url] [/i] 【[U]Custom made techniques[/U]】 [b][u]Jutsu name:[/u][/b] [i]Kage Te Jutsu (Shadow Hand)[/i] [b][u]Rank:[/u][/b] [i]D[/i] [b][u]Range:[/u][/b] [i]Mid[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]This technique is more of a bluff than anything else. The user places a seal on a shuriken and their palm. After throwing the shuriken the user will perform the one handseal and the Shuriken will be transported back to the user’s palm. [/i] [b][u]Jutsu name:[/u][/b] [i] Shibō Garagara (Death Rattle) [/i] [b][u]Rank:[/u][/b] [i]B[/i] [b][u]Range:[/u][/b] [i]Auditory Range[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i] By imbuing her voice with Chakra, Yuen whistles to cast a soothing Genjutsu that either makes the target incredible tired or puts them in a comatose state for up to ten minutes. This is untraceable with the aid of Dojutsu do to it being completely auditory. This requires very little chakra on Yuen’s behalf. This technique, while very difficult to detect can be broken like any other Genjutsu, all it requires is for the victim to realize they are under its spell and have the proficiency to break it.[/ [/i] [b][u]Jutsu name:[/u][/b] [i] Sharingan: Kami no Batsu (Punishment of the Gods) [/i] [b][u]Rank:[/u][/b] [i]B[/i] [b][u]Range:[/u][/b] [i]Eyesight[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]This is Yuen’s personal brand of the Genjutsu: Sharingan technique. She links eyes wither opponent while her Sharingan is currently activated and they will see and feel a crow, attached to their gut. Disemboweling them. Once the victim has taken all they can they will collapse, no permanent damage is done to the victim as long as no complications occur with the unconsciousness. Yuen is able to effectively bring someone with B-Rank efficiency or lower with Genjutsu down with this technique so long as their eyes meet while her Sharingan is active. The only other caveat is that it requires held eye contact for at least three seconds. That means a glimpse in her direction will not allow her to knock someone out. [/i] [b][u]Jutsu name:[/u][/b] [i] Kisu no Shi (Kiss of Death) [/i] [b][u]Rank:[/u][/b] [i]A[/i] [b][u]Range:[/u][/b] [i]Personal[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i] By placing the smallest amount of chakra in both of the ‘tattoos’ in her lips Yuen can effectively and without fail place the enemy in a Genjutsu in which for them it will feel like their heart has stopped and they will be unable to breathe. In reality they will be placed in a deep sleep until [s]true love’s kiss[/s] an hour passes. [/i] 【[U]Weaponry, tools and objects.[/U]】 [b][u]Weapon, tool or object name:[/u][/b] [i]Fuma Shuriken 2x[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]A larger Shuriken, being hit by one could very well be lethal.[/i] [b][u]Weapon, tool or object name:[/u][/b] [i]Weapon Scroll[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]When activated it will return Yuen’s two Fuma Shuriken to her sides. .[/i] [/hider] EDIT: I believe that is all of the requested changes. If I missed something please let me know, I did delete Coercion by the way. Can't come up with a replacement just this second so it'll have to do how it is, my second character is coming up (if we're allowed multiple I don't believe there was anything against it in the rules and most people in the RP seem to have more than one character.