[quote=@Defacto]
You need at least to have 18 years to fly planes (in any flight school) and your character spent 7 years (although you can learn while off duty) as marine
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He only has a recreational license, but I'll just remove that element anyway.

[quote=@Defacto]
... Also the time is 1997... I can't say that we have high tech videogames about flying.
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_of_Microsoft_Flight_Simulator#Flight_Simulator_5.0

[quote=@Defacto]
You still need to explain me the red eyes.
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I'll remove this. It just didn't make sense to me that the virus would rewrite the DNA of the divergents in a different way than the aces, I thought it was just luck that [i]most[/i] of the traits were beneficial. I was trying to add a non-beneficial trait that was created by the virus.

[quote=@Defacto]
Also, can you provide why you character is on the army? If he is rich... why? I'm just trying to make sense to the stuff writen. 	
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His family had this "you still need to do [i]something[/i]" thing going on, where, even though he didn't need to, he should take a proper job for mental health reasons. (The universal right to work is about having a sense of productivity, not being paid.)

[quote=@Defacto]
I don't want to sound like an "evil GM" but can you rework your CS taking note that there's no reason to your power work better in divergents or worst in aces (plus all the questions raised)?
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I did.