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@Blubaron45That might be pretty handy, yes. XD Thank you.

...Man, kids these days are so much better at other languages than I was at that age. ^^; I took French for about ten years (it was compulsary) and I can barely remember any of it nowadays. XD
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@Billsomething Should I make a list or something? Here is just a few words I came up with though they do sound a little strange:

Tetzecochians - From the word tetzotzonqui meaning "stone worker." (although may refer to Dwarves rather than Goblins)
Cypactii - Taken from cipactli meaning "crocodile."
Hucáthens - Taken from the word huecatlaca meaning "outsider." (I think?)
Ahachuayollans - I took this one from Ahachi meaning "small" and cihuayollo meaning "coward."
Mauhcazonians - Took from mauhca which practically means the same as above.
Oztycans - from oztoc meaning "cave" (Had to look this up because I forgot).
Eazotytcai - from eezo meaning "full of blood" and tētiōchīuhquētl which is "death shaman." (had to also look "shaman" up).

Mind you I'm rusty and I'm not exactly a linguist either.
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...Man, kids these days are so much better at other languages than I was at that age.


Actually, it's not as good as you might expect since the language died out in my family when I came to America years ago (my mother speaks far better Nahuatl than I do).
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I vote against any suggestion that causes my eyes to stop focusing. :P

Or: please. A short name. XD
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Well, they're green and have sharp, pointy teeth, so Cypactii might work I guess.

...I will need to remember to call their priests "death shamans" because that sounds pretty metal. XD
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Nahuatl, I'm afraid, is a very tedious language (especially to learn) but it's very interesting after you get the hang of it. Yes, those are Shamans who are in charge of death/blood rituals in the culture.
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Once I get hone I'll check this out and find something to vote on.

Do we want to vote on changes for a race, or do we want to do more a general rule of thing. Like good, needs improvement, needs alot of fixing, and scrap it?
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I think voting on every single race is a bit clunky honestly. It's better if we just discuss them.

Speaking of which, um...

Also, since we're doing high magic(that seems to be the consensus at least), the mecha could probably be powered by using magical means. Airships would probably use balloons made of various materials. Or floating rocks or something.

And, um, I have a few ideas to suggest in regards to some stuff.

First off, um, if anyone actually likes the whole "Inverted Black Tower" thing, it would now be called Edes Athran. It's on its own plane of existence, and in spite of it being an upside-down massive black tower, it's still incredibly malevolent and projects this malevolence onto the living world. It has no mind or thoughts or anything at all, but it's so evil that it casts a shadow into the living world. We'd have to work out what it actually does if anyone likes this idea but yeah.

Secondly, I have a deity to suggest! Her name is Ila-Nem, which is a contraction of Ila-Zenniso-Netuyem, and she is the night goddess(and chief deity) for a race of desert-dwelling humanoids. According to their creation myth, she brought down starlight and forged it into flesh and bone to create them. They are the Nem, who are a nocturnal race that resembles humans. They are extremely pale due to being nocturnal, with slightly-larger-than-most-human's, expressive red or yellow eyes and black hair. They're also very small at 3'4 to 3'5 as adults.


Any thoughts on this stuff? ^^;
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You already know I like the Nem, at least. XD
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Evil Ominous Evilness Tower of Evil Ominousness sounds ominous.
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So, I might have had an idea for the tower... but, well, I ended up writing more than was strictly necessary, and not doing it in an entirely explanatory way. Could be a reason to have abandoned dungeons and magical ruins to fit the high fantasy theme, I guess? XD




Edes Athran. The Inverted Tower. A presence so malignant, so twisted, that even when confined to its own realm a shadow still looms over the rest of the world. Despite mages, priests, and simple scholars alike all agreeing on its presence and its effects, none can concur on its origin.

To some, the edifice is simply intrinsic to the world: Edel Athran was created alongside it to ensure that the intelligent races would never grow complacent, always having something to fear. Whether a nail shattering any hope that all could unite as one or a well-placed driver that the world never stagnates.

Others hold that its evil holds the key to its origins: Edel Athran stands as a testament to Marduk's sins, all evil feeding its growth and good shrinking it. A particularly pessimistic view, presupposing that the world's moral balance eternally sliding to the negative. A small cross-cultural group contends that one day, if differences can never be set aside, the weight of all the evil will push through to the normal world before shattering it entirely; Marduk annihilated by its own sins.

Many of a more religious bent propose that instead of a construction or part of the world, the Inverted Black Tower is instead a corpse, or the remnants of a power beyond that the gods can contend with. The story goes that in a time before the world was populated, one deity had power beyond the others and was ultimately killed--the reasons varying from telling to telling, religion to religion. Their power too great to quash, or their body too immense to destroy, it was sealed away from the world or locked itself away. The dead god's rage and malice poisoned their final remains, which continue to lash out against the other gods' creation.

Whatever its origins, Edel Athran's effects cannot be missed: appearing in dreams and nightmares often, and its malice warping magical creations. Spells go awry as whatever affixes it to this realm shifts, a moving region where the evil is strongest. Spells cast are corrupted, enchantments pervert, magical intelligences are infected by its malice. An unpredictable region whose focus can bring down empires in a night, and whose vast fringes slowly corrode untended magic and thwart apprentice spellcasters' attempts, keeping magic from ever being something truly effortless.
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I like that idea, honestly, especially as it doesn't really give it a clear origin.

If anything, an actual origin for Edes Athran would be discovered much later.
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Hmmm... Maybe whoever it was that built the pyramids the Cypactii are squatting in had a better understanding of what Edes Athran actually is? Although it's hard to ask them about it since they're most likely extinct and the Cypactii only have a very vague understanding of whatever they left behind.
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I like that idea too. Edes Athran is extremely old and all and I'd imagine any civilization could eventually realize it exists.
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i had an idea for the Dark elves to be Cathemeral (it means being able to be active during both the night and day)
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i had an idea for the Dark elves to be Cathemeral (it means being able to be active during both the night and day)


Do people all spontaneously conk out at nightfall where you are? :P
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O.k i wrote this a long time ago and i decided to finally Post it

This deals with the concept of The First Race the same race that build the Pyramids that The Cypactii reside in (it should be noted this was written as it own thing originally but i find to seem to fit into Marduk quite well) so enough raving i am just going to let you guys decide if this is Good or Not
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The first child was the first born daughter of Biasolin and Ravicous. But that daughter also became the first ever-resting for she passed away in her Mother’s arms just mere moments after her birth Biasolin’s grief lasted twelve days.
And in her grief she inadvertently caused the destruction of the first species. Before the death of the first child the first species were an immortal race whose true name had been lost to the sand of time.
But with the death of the first child the immortal spell broke and the first species went extinct and their souls became lost and confused for death was nothing but a mere concept to the first species and so facing a concept that was not thought possible.
The lost and confused souls tried to find their way back to their plane but fate had no intention of having them to return to the plane of the living.
For a thousand years the lost souls would try to return to their plane of origins to no avail and slowly some of these lost souls became tired of it all and just stopped and they would sit down on the clear floor that separated them from the plane of the living.
But soon many of these souls just became content with staying still and watching over these new races and in returned the new mortal races named them The Réalvagt (Guardian Stars)
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Biasolin is the Mother of Life
Ravicous is Biasolin's Husband and the father of Space
The Ever-resting is a term for the deceased (i thought it sounded mystical)
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@Raineh Daze No mostly just me :D
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O.K know it hasn't been long since my last post (16-18 Mins as of time of writing) But i have been having ideas for the Fauna of Marduk (That name has been really Growing on me the more i write it the more i like the name) so here is my list of animals and where they can be located

Mammoths this beast was mentioned in my explanation for why the dark elves diet is mostly carnivorous not much to go on here there just large furry elephants who are used by the dark elves as cattle and a food source

Chupacabra are a Medium sized Vampiric Reptilian Hounds commonly found Hunting livestock in The dense Jungles of Arzula (Wild) or on a leash accompanying a Dimverandi on patrols in the Warms Sands of Orthet. Usually refereed to as Goat-Suckers by The Cypactii the chupacabras are killed on sight by Cypactii as they can cause multitude of problems to the Cypactii the largest of which being the chupacabra's involvement in the killing of Livestock (through draining of the livestock's blood).

The domestication of the chupacabras in Orthet came to be due to "Emperor Valentinus" insistence on that The Dimverandi (One of Orthet Kingdoms greatest Defenses which Consist only of Dark Elves) needed hounds to assist them in battle it was only luck that batch of live chupacabras (before there domestication a chupacabra's hide was used in the handles of many weapons for it was to thin to be used in armor but a chupacabras hide is known for being quite ruff so it make for a perfect grip. its also known for rotting quite fast) had been brought to be used for the aforementioned purpose but having heard of the chupacabra's viciousness Emperor Valentinus ordered for the domestication of the Batch and now there viewed by the Dimverandi as Companions
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@Blubaron45 yo what is Goat in Nahuatl?
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