[@Tuujaimaa] [quote]Kāidǎo [Enlightened][/quote] So they make fantastic sensor nin. [i]How[/i] exactly. You've stated they can sense "spiritual energy," which I'll just assume is a filler word for chakra. To what degree can they sense it? Also, why does he need both the Kāidǎo and the Tengoku no Shidō - Chi ni Teikyō. The abilities are essentially redundant. All techniques can be countered by their assigned chakra affinities. Knowing you this is already a thing, but I'm stating it here in case you thought it wouldn't be. [hider=Seiryu][quote]Seiryu no Tachiba: Fuyu no Ibuki [Stance of the Dragon: Breath of Winter], Seiryu no Tachiba: Totsuzen no Kōsetsu [Stance of the Dragon: Sudden Snowfall][/quote] I'm gonna go with no on his other techniques always using Senmon Haki. Consider this non-negotiable. [quote]Seiryu no Tachiba: Ryū no Ikidōri [Stance of the Dragon: Dragonwrath][/quote] More or less fine with the storm. Just know that it's going to be chakra intensive. Also, no on freezing the person solid once their tenketsu are all sealed. That's ridiculous on so many levels.[/hider] [hider=Suzaku][quote]Suzaku no Tachiba: Hōō no Oha [Stance of the Phoenix: Tail Feathers of the Vermilion Bird][/quote] Lower the Area of effect.[/hider] [hider=Genbu][quote]Genbu no Tachiba: Nishi no Hoshō [Stance of the Turtle: Sentinel of the West][/quote] So I'm going to be generous and allow the petrification. However, you don't get to reduce the time by 1 minute per strike, but instead 15 seconds per strike. Sorry, otherwise that shit is ridiculous. Also the petrification is resistible and/or NOT permanent. [quote]Genbu no Tachiba: Tsuchi nado Fukutsu [Stance of the Turtle: Unyielding as the Earth][/quote] Remove the time reduction on this technique. You don't get to reduce the time because you blocked someone. [quote]Genbu no Tachiba: Shibara-ji no Ashikase [Stance of the Turtle: Fetters of the Earthbound][/quote] Each hitodama should increase the strength of this effect, but the initial effect does not cause much strain and does not wholly bind at least one foot to the ground. This fits the theme of the style better imo, AND is more balanced.[/hider] [hider=Byakko]You keep mentioning Byakko's Wrath, but you don't have a technique for it. [quote]Byakko no Tachiba: Arashi-Ryoku [Stance of the Tiger: Storm Force][/quote] No body/soul separation. Thanks. [quote]Byakko no Tachiba: Kaze no Minamoto [Stance of the Tiger: Source of all Winds][/quote] Every 2 seconds, not every 1. That'd be a lot of stacks of Byakko's wrath even if they're bound to disperse after the technique (which I know they are).[/hider] [quote]Reiho [Spirit Step][/quote] No. This should have to be placed separate from his normal strikes. [quote]Shokei Shimasu [Execute][/quote] Haha, I see you adding Suishou's technique here. How about no to the secondary effect and state his style can't replicate that portion of the technique due to the other effects his chakra causes. The reason for the OOCly, it's too much on top of his other abilities. Remove it or make that edit.