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[hider=Equipment][quote]Masayoshi, Saikōsai no Ken [Justice, Blade of the Supreme Court][/quote]
So, the blade [i]is[/i] style physical, right? Or is it basically a light saber? If it's a light saber...I don't know if I can allow that because it'd cut through everything except chakra or things built to withstand it.

[quote]Kōha Megane [Lightwave Goggles][/quote]
One thing. I presume these can be broken with considerable force, yes? Because you certainly did not mention them being durable. Nonetheless I assume they are reinforced due to them being used in combat.[/hider]
[hider=Kekkei Genkai][quote]Hokori no Exae [Pride of Exae][/quote]
Automatically giving them taijutsu prowess in addition to a master gaining fine tuned manipulation of kinetic, heat, and electrical energy. Mmm, so many possibilities for abuse, but then again it's not much worse than someone having advanced base chakra control in addition to the fire and lightning affinity.

Annoying because, as we talked about, it's not inherently OP...just potentially so, as are most things.

The only thing that jumps out of me is, if they are drawing this energy from another realm, is their normal chakra largely supplanted with this energy and if not then why would they ever get tired in combat?

If there is a reason they'd get tired at roughly the same rate as their chakra pool would cause in a normal person, then it's fine. If not, then there needs to be. Simple as that. Keep in mind that I ask these questions/make these statements to make ABSOLUTELY SURE you don't slip something under my nose. I'd do it with anything that might have this sort of vagueness to it, so it's not exclusive to my reviews for you.

Oh yeah, this needs an affinity weakness or two. I'm going to go with earth and water since you use fire and lightning effects.[/hider]
[hider=Jutsu][quote]Yagami no Hagai [Wings of Light][/quote]
I'll assume that the "recharge," takes energy from the seals/her chakra system for it to work. If not, then fix that.

Given her chakra pool. How many times do you think she can recharge her wings?

[quote]Teiden Ken [Blackout Blade][/quote]
How much kinetic energy we talking here? Does the strength of this technique depend on the illumination of her surroundings? If so, lets assume an average lighting during the day NOT in the shade and with the glow that emanates from her and her wings. In this scenario, what would she feasibly be able to cut through?

This is an important thing to consider I'd say as it dictates the average strength of the technique.

[quote]Hōsha Ken [Radiant Sword][/quote]
I'll assume this technique is equal in strength to Teiden Ken, but requires more of her own chakra due to her creating the flash of light first.

[quote]Teiden Kyū [Blackout Sphere][/quote]
How many "extra blades," does this form?

[quote]Hōshaha no Kyūzō [Radiant Wave Surge][/quote]
So the blade legitimately becomes a light saber temporarily potentially with extra kinetic energy behind the blow). Noted. Nothing wrong with this really.

[quote]Yagami no Yoroi [Light Release Armour][/quote]
How fast does it make her or does it not augment her speed? Keep in mind that the real life speed of a human in peak human condition is 12 meters per second (44.7 km per hour). I imagine the average speed in the narutoverse is between 24 and 48 meters per second (86-173 km per hour). Someone with a high speed technique is going to be moving drastically faster than that, and while I'm not going to keep it entirely realistic (due to the fact that if we did, we'd have to account for people vanishing due to how fast their moving, which would require someone move nearly the speed of sound) so yeah. Just extrapolate from there.

[quote]Shukuchi [Reduced Earth][/quote]
As long as she can't make multiple markers at a time, meaning she can only have two active at a time (the one beneath her and the one in another location). Just saying, but 15 feet is only 4.5 meters, which isn't that fast by naruto standards ;) I'd go so far as to say it would actually be slow for a shinobi xD

In fact, you can up the speed.

[quote]Yagami no Kusari [Chains of Light][/quote]
Fun fact, which you don't get to edit this technique to alter. Someone could feasibly exert chakra from their body, making it so she can no longer influence the area directly around their body. This would mean what while they wouldn't be able to use projectile weaponry, they'd be able to move. So yeah, watch out for that.

No adding a technique to deal with that. The fact that there is a plausible counter is what keeps this technique from being banned outright. So yeah, that.

[quote]Chikaiki [Oathbreaker][/quote]
How large is the area within which the light explosion occurs? Is it also 40 feet because if so, reduce that to 15 feet. As to the ground undergoing what is effectively explosive upheaval (which would be a great technique name btw haha) this is going to cost her a good deal of chakra to do. So yeah, expect to be tired after a max of two uses of this. 4 uses is probably going to make her nearly out of chakra.


[quote]Mayu o Nenshō [Burning Cocoon][/quote]
If used around someone else it should not burn them, but defend them from attack. Nothing else to say about this, other than that it's going to be pretty draining over time.

[quote]Shikōsai [Arbiter Supremus][/quote]
Careful. Fyi, she shouldn't be able to burn people by running through them since you stated she is incapable of causing physical damage aside from her techniques. She also can't disrupt chakra by running through someone as that as OP as all hell. Also, again, how fast does she become?

[quote]Gijin no Shisen [Gaze of the Righteous][/quote]
Translation: She can stop ANYONE AND EVERYONE fighting her from moving for enough to for her to slaughter all of them with supreme ease. No.

Stipulations for acceptance:
1.) The further from her you are, the more able to move you become.
2.) This is still counterable by the same method as Yagami no Kusari, but it requires more chakra to utilize.
3.) Reduce the time to 15 seconds. 30 seconds is a long time in combat when you can move at ridiculous speeds, which most shinobi can. 15 is long too, but this is clearly a very chakra taxing technique. So yeah.
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I have no problems with the offensive version, aside from the fact that there's no hard counter aside from "vague strength." So it can be countered with chakra, preferably earth affinity.

[quote]Chōshinsei [Supernova][/quote]
This needs to be active for a full 1 and a half minutes. No complaining because its effect is already ridiculous as is. However it will require 15 sound strikes or 5-10 techniques designed to counter it. Water and ice will be most effective as counters. However, there are going to be other viable methods.[/hider]