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I suppose I’m not sure exactly what you mean. Do you mean giving or receiving? The way I’ve always done it back when I was a player was to learn off Byrd Man, Eddie Brock, Bounce, Morden Man (Union Jack), and Master Bruce’s posts by reading them and trying to get a similar voice as they had. I asked a few of them through private messages about specific advice and tips which worked out swimmingly for me. Though I obviously still have problems myself (my White Tiger post has some run-on’s and fluidity of written language issues for example). I love doing these games because I keep constantly learning whilst having fun.
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Both, I guess. Like you said, there's some stuff here and there in your posts and others - run-on's, repeating certain words, purple prose - that people tend not to see until they're pointed out. There's a lot of stuff in my writing I didn't catch until an editor called me on it (and who keeps calling me on it) and there's probably stuff I'm still not seeing. Like the fact I wrote stuff three times (four times including the last).