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@Rin My first one piece character was a devil fruit user. It was the storage storage fruit, the ability to store anything into his own personal fourth dimension. I realized right away it was completely broken so I created a lot of limitations. Not only that but I made sure not to make things unfair.
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@Boss MuffinMy personal favourite original Devil Fruit idea was the Fruit-Fruit Fruit, which let the user summon any kind of fruit. You can probably guess what the first limitation I put on it was. XD
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@Boss MuffinMy personal favourite original Devil Fruit idea was the Fruit-Fruit Fruit, which let the user summon any kind of fruit. You can probably guess what the first limitation I put on it was. XD


That's amazing. My own personal favorite was someone wanted the water water fruit the guy was upset he couldn't use it but the concept made no sense since water is a fruit users enemy
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@Boss MuffinMy personal favourite original Devil Fruit idea was the Fruit-Fruit Fruit, which let the user summon any kind of fruit. You can probably guess what the first limitation I put on it was. XD


Remind me to tell you the tales of the Hole-Hole Fruit. A fruit that let the user summon cartoonish black holes that led to nothing. He could also punch people in the balls by summoning one of the aforementioned holes directly bellow them and punching into a different hole.

That was a fun time.
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Remind me to tell you the tales of the Hole-Hole Fruit. A fruit that let the user summon cartoonish black holes that led to nothing. He could also punch people in the balls by summoning one of the aforementioned holes directly bellow them and punching into a different hole.

That was a fun time.


I briefly thought about making a hard water fruit for my current chara but realized how ass-backwards that would have been in hindsight. Fishman can already use water like a logia fruit user and if I remember right oda said that fishman + devil fruit = insta dead fish, which would make a lot of sense biologically speaking. A fishman that can't swim, that's like a person that can't breathe air.
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I have a quick question. Do you think it'll be possible if me and a friend have our own ship? Would it break up the storyline if a two-man crew was also operating within the story.


I might consider it but I would really like to keep it to a single crew. If you wanted a second ship but we sailed together I don't see how that would be a problem. I have seen many OP rp's and the ones that split up into multiple crews almost always get either too confusing or end up focusing on one far more than the other. It is my general rule that I want us to keep to one crew. It is an option that I may consider in the future.
...I find it somewhat amusing that I've ended up being the only one with a Devil Fruit thus far, when one of the problems I've noted about previous One Piece RPs I've been in was the overload of not just Devil Fruits, but really rare ones like Logias and Mythical Zoans. XD


At that point I am also going to put bans on the number. I can understand one or two but not half the crew. I also recommend that you make up your own rather than using the ones that already exist. If you use a logia, which I actually don't recommend but haven't banned, you need to write in plenty of weaknesses to go along with it.
Now how on Earth am I going to phrase a sound-sound fruit that doesn't sound ridiculously strong?

On that note I want a "sound sound" fruit to be a specific power. For example it wouldn't be a logia. I would also not pass a sound-sound fruit that allowed the user to move at the speed of sound. Someone that could use sound vibrations to their advantage YES that would pass. I want to hear the powers before I ever actually reject them. The only reason I have interjected here was just to hopefully encourage you to take a specific route for "sound" powers. As a slight and tiny spoiler there is an NPC that has been created that uses "sound" in a specific way later. It is doubtful that you would chose the powers as designated by this person (and if you did by some miracle) then I would scrap the character.

This is because I am not going to list out all the powers of the NPC's I have and I wouldn't tell someone "No you can't do that because I have a character planned for it" either.

Am I making sense? I don't feel like I'm making sense.

going to double post now because I want to spend a bit of time critiquing the characters put up.
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Using notepad because my browser is a big pooper...



Looks like you are missing just a few little things from the CS but nothing substantial. To clarify you do not have a Devil Fruit yes?

If I understand it correctly the character gets my


I like the character overall but I don't think that I can write off the Yami-yami no mi. If you want a different devil fruit or none at all it should be fine. That is the only portion that I will have to have you edit.


Is he always hot? Or is it a paramedium style fruit that allows him to create high temperatures at will? Can he only do it in his own body or can he transfer the heat?

And I cannot write off on the conqueror's haki. Not even the captain has this ability. Perhaps later on in the rp some people may develop it but for now that is going to be a no on that haki power.
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@yorutenchi can you just set limits on the fruit..or i'd still have to change
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@Yorutenchi Yea, Its written that he has the possibility, the potential in other words. He can't use Conqueror's Haki now and won't for a very long time but I wanted it to be known that he would in the future. No need to be around the bush about it. The way I see it, the captain is stronger than him. She's skilled in her Observation Haki and he hasn't even tapped into any of his yet.

Also, I don't believe my character should be compared to the captain lol. Every individual is unique.

Atsu Atsu no Mi cannot raise the temperature of another person, unless it environmental. Cause he can control the heat of his body, making it possible to heat up the area around him. If that's the case, than yea he can. But he can't burn somebody up from the inside. If you need me to I can add it into the SU. Though the Wikia explains the Canon in its entirety.
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@IraCould you at least use a different shade of blue in your CS? It hurts my eyes. XD
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@yorutenchi can you just set limits on the fruit..or i'd still have to change


I didn't want to make an outright banned list of fruit. My hope is that all fruit would be unique to the rp with either a totally new fruit or a unique twist on the fruit. As I stated in the RP you can use an existing fruit but if you create your own techniques. But for a total banned list of fruit it would be the Gum-Gum, whitebeard's fruit (forget its name), Yami-yami and the Light fruit and Magma fruit. But there are three fruit that come to mind that would have to be banned. Those are all either far to OP to have at the beginning or I just didn't want them in there. Gum gum ban should be obvious and of the fruit shown in the manga/games/anime it seems that the magma, light, darkness and vibration fruit were far to powerful. On the line is also the lighting fruit but I wanted to see how that person set it up before saying no. More or less the same for any logia fruit.
@Yorutenchi Yea, Its written that he has the possibility, the potential in other words. He can't use Conqueror's Haki now and won't for a very long time but I wanted it to be known that he would in the future. No need to be around the bush about it. The way I see it, the captain is stronger than him. She's skilled in her Observation Haki and he hasn't even tapped into any of his yet.

Also, I don't believe my character should be compared to the captain lol. Every individual is unique.

Atsu Atsu no Mi cannot raise the temperature of another person, unless it environmental. Cause he can control the heat of his body, making it possible to heat up the area around him. If that's the case, than yea he can. But he can't burn somebody up from the inside. If you need me to I can add it into the SU. Though the Wikia explains the Canon in its entirety.


Eventually you may pick it up but it will be at the digression of myself or the co-gm as to when a power like that would awaken. If that is agreeable I can approve your character.
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Looks like you are missing just a few little things from the CS but nothing substantial. To clarify you do not have a Devil Fruit yes?

If I understand it correctly the character gets my



That would be correct. My character is just a deaf cook that knows knife fighting. :P
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That would be correct. My character is just a deaf cook that knows knife fighting. :P


Good to go then. YOu may post it in the CS.

I think I will make the IC a little later. There will be plenty of chances for people to post or edit their characters.
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@YorutenchiOh right, before I go to sleep and forget I wanted to ask if it would be okay to add in one little detail to Polly's Devil Fruit? Just for some reason thought it would be cool if, tangentially related to her voice mimicry, she could also talk to birds. I mean she probably doesn't even realize she has this power yet, but yeah. XD If it's not okay then I'm fine with just leaving it out, but yeah.
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@YorutenchiOh right, before I go to sleep and forget I wanted to ask if it would be okay to add in one little detail to Polly's Devil Fruit? Just for some reason thought it would be cool if, tangentially related to her voice mimicry, she could also talk to birds. I mean she probably doesn't even realize she has this power yet, but yeah. XD If it's not okay then I'm fine with just leaving it out, but yeah.


Voice mimicry sounds like a good addition to her power. I approve. You don't get another seal though.
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@Yorutenchi I can agree to that, Yoru. Now I await the almighty seal

And I'd like your opinion on my Beli bounty.
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@Yorutenchi I can agree to that, Yoru. Now I await the almighty seal

And I'd like your opinion on my Beli bounty.




If you want a bounty lets have it set at 10 mil for now. It will go up in time.

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@Yorutenchi YESH!

I'll be sure to prove my worth and make ya proud.
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...I find it somewhat amusing that I've ended up being the only one with a Devil Fruit thus far, when one of the problems I've noted about previous One Piece RPs I've been in was the overload of not just Devil Fruits, but really rare ones like Logias and Mythical Zoans. XD



Came into this conversation a half a day late, but screw it.

Every time I try to think up a devil-fruit, I realize that its either already been done, or that It'd slowly turn into using something like control of dust to make a sand belt out of particles to grind through steel. So I guess I'll just make a NORMAL guy, like the filthy casual I am.
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