[@knighthawk] You do as you please, the thing that made him a target because he was somewhat of a special snowflake was just farfetched in the current political climate. The char is good if you've edited the technical parts (which I'll check anyway) 

[@TheUnknowable] Look up Narutopedia on the internet. I recommend gathering knowledge on Shippuden a bit because you kind of gave us a clusterfuck of abilities that even a Sonic Fanfic wouldn't put. Don't take it badly, it's evident that you're behind the current references we're using. But you will have to grow accustomed to what Naruto currently is before pitching a Frankenstein of various techniques main protagonists have (boring). I also recommend looking at the techniques of other characters so you can get an idea of what we're going for.