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[hider=Yuganori, Kinuko][quote]Idō no Inkan [Seal of Transference][/quote]
This needs to have a max amount of energy it can store.

[quote]Hikisaku no Inkan [Seal of Rending][/quote]
I'd like to know the unsaid limitations on this. If they aren't sufficient she can't have it as it'd be RIDICULOUSLY abuse-able.[/hider]
[hider=Hyakune, Kyoko][hider=Kekkei Genkai][quote]Tōsei no Eien; Tenchi Gensō [Eternal Control; Heaven and Earth Illusion][/quote]
So while I reviewed your techniques it suddenly occurred to me that even if someone managed to break out of Kyoko's genjutsu, she could just put them right back into it repeatedly. Yes it'd cost her chakra, but she has plenty of that. So I'm going to say that people build a temporary immunity to her. The more she uses a specific genjutsu on them, the more resistant they become to them over time IF they manage to break out of the given technique.

This may have been common sense, but I want it clearly stated in the Kekkei genkai.

Additionally, if one is moved, or moves, out of her field the effects of any genjutsu they were under will gradually fade over a period of 4 minutes after which they wholly cease to function with few exceptions. If they get back into the field, or are locked into genjutsu otherwise, the technique will still work of course.[/hider]
[hider=Jutsu][quote]Gensoku Jikan [Slowed Time][/quote]
She can't attack them with anything except her two strongest skill sets. Also, while someone could get themselves out of this, it's pretty ridiculous given the speed at which she can utilize additional genjutsu. Basically this needs more limitations.

[quote]Shosai no Kogeru [Burning the Libraries][/quote]
No, you may not permanently remove memories. Reason being, that'd require her to have the ability to manipulate the chemical and electrical stuffs in the brain. It'd mean she could alter neural pathways at will WITHOUT yang or lightning chakra or anything that'd feasibly allow that, barring seals. Basically, she can alter memories, but the alterations are stimulated by her yin chakra and are not permanent ones. I'm not negotiating this, so don't ask me if I'll change my mind in skype.

[quote]Rei Yakedo [Spirit Burn][/quote]
I...feel like the secondary effect is a bit much honestly. I'm fine with crippling pain, but I'm not fine with it causing most shinobi to pass out. I realize it can be resisted. I'll even go so far as to make sure no one just decides "Oh hur dur, I'm special so I can easily trudge through the pain," if anyone tries to. So yeah, make it not cause one to generally pass out. It can be _nearly_ that painful, and it'd likely cause that effect on an unprepared chuunin AND FOR SURE ON A GENIN. Some higher ranked individuals wouldn't be particularly resistant to its effects either. So yeah. Make that change please.

[quote]Ishiki Zansuru [Sensory Banish][/quote]
This technique is incredibly broken. The removal of a sense is fine, but the fact that additionally they become unable to see the seal on their person and thus can't remove the genjutsu. It's a perfect feedback loop, which means it is broken and not okay. Remove that trait from the jutsu please.

[quote]In Somnis Veritas [In Dreams, Truth][/quote]
I'm gonna mandate that this is purely out of combat.

[quote]Setsuri no Hametsu [Providence’s Bane][/quote]
If the target is moved outside of her field, this technique ceases to work [i]and[/i] they will remember it having taken place.

[quote]Eien no Inkan [Seal of Eternity][/quote]
I...can't even begin to explain just how OP this is in ANY battle where Kyoko is fighting only one person. So, I'm going to say put a time limit and an amount of times it can re initiate a genjutsu of each rank on this technique. That's the only way I can see it being allowed in any capacity.[/hider][/hider]
[@Innue] nice map. I'll add it to the village sheet somewhere.

[@OneWayOut], good job on the Village sheet, I'll add it to the second post.