Such young Kage! You little tater tots won't even remember the Sage before he passed... Kirino Takeda... I ask that you elaborate on her personality more, Beta. I would like to get to know my Kazekage more than that one paragraph. ^_^ Maybe speak of how the abuse impacted her psyche? No qualms about her Jutsu. Suoh Kioku - How can he not enjoy the delight of the delicious kiwi?! His history does not blend well with this RP, he cannot have a Bijuu sealed in him from the beginning. This will need changing, however I like the character as a whole. Ayano Koizumi - Accepted Iyana Tetsujin - the 'Shade Covering' ability I am weary about... Closed Revolutions is barred from use until she becomes a Chuunin. I see the potential here, it is potent, however... ACCEPTED! I greatly enjoyed reading this CS. Eiji Nazomeku - Jinsoku Wakare will be limited to two times in succession, and a minute between uses. Just to limit the abuse potential this technique has. Other than that, accepted.