[quote=Beta] Yoshua. Tell Verbande that Sloth and I miss him and he needs to talk to us more. [/quote] No. I'm too lazy. [quote=Ouroboros]Iyana Tetsujin - the 'Shade Covering' ability I am weary about... Closed Revolutions is barred from use until she becomes a Chuunin. I see the potential here, it is potent, however... ACCEPTED! I greatly enjoyed reading this CS. Eiji Nazomeku - Jinsoku Wakare will be limited to two times in succession, and a minute between uses. Just to limit the abuse potential this technique has. Other than that, accepted.[/quote] Lol, very well. It's just a high speed movement technique. Made the changes to both CSs. Closed Revolutions has been labeled "unlearned" (or was it not learned...whatever) in brackets next to the name of the jutsu. I changed the weakness specifications of Jinsoku Wakare as you have asked. As to shade covering, it is meant to be a very malleable technique. It will become the core of her fighting style as she progresses. Also, I am quite glad you enjoyed both of my characters, I try to craft them skillfully~ Will get on top of the raikage's creation tomorrow methinks. Though I did say that...yeah.