Ekirei, it looks fine, though you don't have to add the "pts." :P Oh, and you also forgot to assign ratings to your keywords. It may make sense to give those the higher ratings, though it's by no means necessary. He is after all a rather atypical vorcha, and not your average Sentinel either, so it may make sense that it's his other qualities that really shine through.

One thing that occurred to me. It's technically an IC matter that is going to come up at some point early in the game, but I feel it may be best if I consulted with you about it beforehand in OOC. I think your team may need a leader. While ideally all the PCs would have some input over your chosen courses of action, a leader would act as a "party face" when necessary, speaking for the whole group, and may be contacted by the Director more often (though the briefings/debriefings would still involve the entire party). Whether the leader will have any special authority or responsibilities beyond that is largely up to you, but I think it may add an interesting added dimension of play to have the possibility of the leader pulling rank and the others resisting him just lying out there.

In any case, the Project's preference for leader is fairly obvious: Quash Vayex, who after all had been a second in command over a mercenary group. is older than the rest of you combined and has been fighting for most of that time. And his general level-headedness should help too.

Are there any OOC objections to this?