[quote=@Keyblade87]
Alright now that thaf was fixed (hopefully) i realized my cs is basically done. Let me know if theres anything i should fix/change
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I think you'll want to spend a bit more time thinking through the bio. For a jounin, your character is very outclassed by many of the other characters (even some of the Gennin and Chuunin) and would have a hard time holding his own. I'm willing to help you out as much as I can with this, but I'd need to know a few things.

For starters, we need to decide how you want your character to actually operate in combat. What sorts of tactics does he prefer? What strengths does he have? What are his weak points? Does her prefer operating at ranged or does he like to get up close for his attacks? I do know your character probably would want to operate at close range given his name. It might be good to think through some tactics he could do with that (it would be potentially good based of the history for him to have begun to develop some elemental kenjutsu (sword techniques) after realizing it was a potent combination).

Some example techniques would be:
- <Jutsu Name> ignites his blade with a hot flame, extending the offensive reach of the weapon by a few feet as well as making the blade harder to avoid.
- Rekindle - With a strong Katon chakra nature, Akira is capable of reigniting any object or individual that has been hit in the last few seconds by his sword of his flame techniques with a lesser version of the flame technique already used. The longer he waits between utilizing Rekindle from the initial attack, the weaker Rekindle is. Rekindle cannot be used on Rekindle.

But without knowing more about your character, it is hard for me to offer more advice (it is also really late at night for me right now).

What I may suggest, especially given how cutthroat some of the characters can be in this thread, is to consider playing a lower ranked character, such as a Chuunin or even a Gennin (there is absolutely nothing wrong with that, plus with a gennin we could start a squad for Kyokujitsugakure). The advantage to this is you will A) be less of a target B) be under the protection of other high ranking members of your village. This will allow you to get ideas for additional techniques that your character can learn as he progresses (I know you are eager to jump in right now, but your character just isn't quite Jounin level), as well as learn from some of the more experienced fighters on the thread (combat roleplay can be challenging). 

Just don't feel discouraged. There is a lot of people on the thread who can help if you really want to commit to that jounin or if you want to get into the thread quicker, consider a chuunin or even a gennin. I'll work with you on either way you want to go.