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Cs 
Real Life

Real Life Name: Zack Questro
Real Life Gender: Male
Real Life Age: 30
Real Life Appearance: He has short buzz cut black hair, blue eyes, a fair complexion, a strong jaw, and a slightly over averagely long nose.  He is 5'11" tall and weighs about 160 lbs.  He has a fit figure, for example he is slim, does not quite have a six pack but he has built some muscles in his arms, shoulders and legs.  He likes to wear black t-shirts and black pants, with light brown steel toed shoes while working.  When he is off the job he wears Dark Blue Jeans and various casual striped shirts.  Also his shoes while not working are normally running shoes of various designs.  
Family: A brother, who still lives in Zack's hometown.  
Friends: Not really, just regular customers.  
Bio: He lives in a smaller city, and is a local antique collector and an antique shop owner.  He earned the money for the shop, by saving up working as a news paper deliverer during grade school.  Now, when he is not working at his shop, he spends some time in museums, at the local bar playing darts and generally just going around advertising his business.  

Game

In Game Name: Vold  Marlo
In Game Gender: Male 
In Game Species:Human
In Game Class: Thief
In Game Secondary Class:Warrior
In Game Class Level:1 
In Game Secondary Class Level:1 
Jobs: Spy and Leatherworking
In Game Appearance: [img]http://orig15.deviantart.net/627e/f/2008/276/c/3/black_tight_shirt_by_kotenka1984.jpg[/img]

Personality: Easy going, talkative, when he is not working and blunt to the point of saying, "Get the hell out of my face.", while he is trying to do his job.  He does have a weakness for greed, usually for money or material goods.  He is also very competitive when it comes to anything he cares about.   

Stats: 100 to Spend
Health 20
Strength 15
Stamina 65
Intellect (magic healing sat)
Spirit (MP)
Resilience (magic defense)
Endurance (defense)
Willpower (magic damage)
Experience 

First Class Skills: picking and unlocking most locks, disarming unsuspecting opponents, Wall climbing.   

Secondary Class Skills: Rage: if he gets hit enough that his health drops to half, his speed is increased to twice that of his starting speed.  Leap: He can jump into the air and land with great force.  

No pet.  

Pet Species:
Pet Class:
Set Secondary Class:
Pet Appearance: 
Pet Stats: 100 to Spend
Health (hp)
Strength (physical damage) 
Stamina (sp)
Intellect (magic healing sat)
Spirit (MP)
Resilience (magic defense)
Endurance (defense)
Willpower (magic damage)
Experience 

Pet Skills:

Pet Secondary Skills:

Choose your own Skills. 
First Class: Lockpicking, disarmament and wall climbing. 

Second Class: Rage and Leap.  

Other: He likes throwing daggers at targets.  
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Good Cs. Just two minor things.

Choose your own Skills. 
First Class: Lockpicking, disarmament and wall climbing. 

Second Class: Rage and Leap. 

You mentioned this twice. Once in your skills, and once in your pet skills. You don't need to mention it twice.

Secondly you put no stats onto your defense. So you will take a lot of damage from enemies. I recommend putting some points on your defense stats but it isn't needed. It's ultimately up to you. 

Either way, these things aren't important. So you're accepted. If you are happy with your Cs then post it in the character section.