[quote=@Gowi] My issues: [indent]The alien abduction seems utterly random, perhaps as a contrived way to throw Cash into one of the few galactic scenarios going on in the RP. I understand that the Daemonites are part of his New 52 history so they aren’t exactly left field. But even if you intended to elaborate on the Daemonites in the RP it would be nice what their intentions are and why they selected Cole in the first place. The biography feels really rushed. Why did you choose to incorporate The Losers (something that isn’t in the Grifter’s relations) and not the canonical Team 7? Unlike other character sheets that incorporated non-traditional elements this doesn’t seem to be here for any cohesive reason. That’s me nitpicking however.[/indent] We’ve accepted short CS’s before but the content here seems rather lacking even for a brief backstory. [/quote] All legitimate concerns. I'll see to them. Though; reasons I never did include Team 7 is because that's part of the Wildstar version of the character, where as I'm going for the New 52 one. In which they did leave a gigantic hole in his backstory. A hole filled by the Losers. I'll make sure to add them to the relations.