Looking decent, User. Finish it up, fix it, and I'm sure it'll be great.

However, I'm not sure about airships and whatnot... perhaps they're a thing unique to Straneyeth, currently, in-RP? I like them, a lot, but I don't want them to detail in Kiruth (where the RP takes place) right now.

Edit: As well, only the strongest vitae spells actually do things such as modify the flow of time. It'd be far simpler for you to say it simply speeds up him. Anyway, Vitae also doesn't really give you a headache unless you're doing freaky illusion-warping shit.