[@Fallenreaper] [hider=Akane Arashi][hider=General Data][quote=Birthplace and Village]Lock Wind's Ship. Getsugakure.[/quote] You'd just put "N/A" in the Village section. For birthplace you mean Tsukigakure ;) [quote=Additional appearance details]Her clothing fashion is similar to this , [b]but with a few [i][u]altercations.[/u][/i][/b][/quote] You mean "alterations" :P In Position you'd put whatever type of crew mate she is on the ship. Didn't you say she was the Quartermaster? If so, that's what you put there.[/hider] [hider=Jutsu][quote]Earther Spear[/quote] Should just be "Earth Spear." Also, she should only be able to apply this to one limb at a time.[/hider][/hider] Make those small changes, then she is accepted and you may add her to the bin. [hider=Yūdai, Kisaki and Touho, Yodai][quote]Megumi no Fuujin [Grace of the Wind God][/quote] Fine. [quote]Megumi no Fuujin: Kin'yoku no Michi [Grace of the Wind God: Path of the Ascetic][/quote] Fine. [quote]Megumi no Fuujin: Hyōgi-kai no Ishi [Grace of the Wind God: Will of the Council][/quote] Fine. [quote]Kaiko no Fuujin [Wind God’s Dismissal][/quote] Fine. [quote]Seidō no Fuujin [Wind God’s Sanctuary][/quote] Fine as long as it also effects the user, meaning she can't throw techniques out or through the area, using it as an ultimate defense in the process. [quote]Kamikaze no Fuujin: Ran’un [Wind God’s Divine Whirlwind: Storm Clouds][/quote] Fine. [quote]Kamikaze no Fuujin: Arashi [Wind God’s Divine Whirlwind: Tempest][/quote] Fine. [quote]Kamikaze no Fuujin: Hayate [Wind God’s Divine Whirlwind: Hurricane][/quote] Give this a maximum time it can be used. I'm gonna say 2 minutes maximum if you want to use up all your chakra (since getting to this level requires the use of prior techniques, which means the combo is already chakra taxing). If you've been using other jutsu prior to this technique's use, then its activation time, or power, will be reduced. [quote]Namida no Fuujin [Tears of the Wind God][/quote] Fine. [quote]Ataishinai Handan [Judge Unworthy][/quote] Fine. [quote]Keibetsu no Fuujin [Wind God’s Contempt][/quote] Fine. [quote]Shidō tame Tangan [Plea for Guidance][/quote] Fine. [quote]Tenno Shimo no Hairetsu [Heavenly Array of Frost][/quote] What is the maximum size of this sphere? [quote]Akishimo no Gishiki [Rite of Frostfall][/quote] One use per 3/4ths chakra pool, anything below that weakens the effect. Exhausts you completely unless your chakra pool is full. [quote]Totsuzen no Akishimo [Sudden Frostfall][/quote] The ring can expand out to a maximum of 4 meters. [quote]Seishin no Fuujin [Spirit of the Wind God][/quote] You become vulnerable to katon. Otherwise fine. [quote]Sentaku sa Reta no Fuujin [Chosen of Fuujin][/quote] Obviously fine lol. [quote]Heishi no Fuujin [Soliders of Fuujin][/quote] Fine. [quote]Kaze o Sanran [Scatter the Wind][/quote] Fine. [quote]Shinden no Fuujin [Temple of Fuujin][/quote] Fine. Can only be placed within the area of Megumi no Fuujin [Grace of the Wind God]. [quote]Hōfuku no Fūjin [Wind God’s Retribution][/quote] Fine. [quote]Kisetsufū [Monsoon][/quote] Fine. [quote]Hogo no Fuujin [Protection of Fuujin][/quote] Fine. [quote]Shindenmon [Temple Gate][/quote] Fine. [quote]Arashi no Kyoku [Song of Storms][/quote] "significant chakra cost." More like, haha, all of your chakra. She'd be near passing out after use. If she is below 3/4ths of her chakra, then she can't use this technique. Obviously only one use per 3/4ths of chakra. She [i]could[/i] use it with below 3/4ths of chakra, but it will be reduced range and won't expand to larger sizes. [quote]Nagare o Yon [Read the Flow][/quote] Fine. [quote]Megumi no Fūjin: Reitekina Yoroi [Grace of the Wind God: Spiritual Armour][/quote] Hmm...I suppose so, but this is gonna have a steep chakra cost.[/hider]