Sorry [@Ambrosia], but it appears I already have the three available slots taken. If one of these [s]NEEEERDS[/s] people have to show themselves out or something, I'll tell you that a slot's open though. [@User], alright, few critiques, finish them then it's 100% done. 1: 38 Is too old. for the 'Team B' Hunters the upper 20's is a good softcap. 2: Sky iron? Elaborate on its' properties. If it's the same thing as what switch-weapons are made out of I'll have to shoot that down. 3: Your primary weapon isn't cool [i]enough[/i], your primary weapon should have two 'modes' of operation, such as McMolly's Cinderwill, which transforms from a warped-sword into an axe. I'm thinking the musket could go from a rifle into a spear or some other long, thin weapon. 4: Perhaps go into more detail about his strengths and weaknesses in-combat? That's primarily what I meant. 5: It's a bit of a wall of text, and you drop in and out 'of character' which is weird. Those are my only complaints, now. P.S. and yes we'll be starting when the three new players are fully approved.